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Poeminister
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0 posted 2001-07-05 02:57 PM


Tide what tide: I'll bide
Ever, my love, by your side,
shadow what shadow

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 07-05-2001).]

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Decaflame
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1 posted 2001-07-05 03:01 PM


Poeminister....in response....

moon, seek my shadows
tides everlasting, gone now
still I feel the surf

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-07-05 03:05 PM


Beautiful!
VAS
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3 posted 2001-07-05 03:21 PM


Intriguing, so intriguing.  It pulls the mind in to seek why it is touching the heart so...a clearer understanding is sought.
Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2001-07-05 04:00 PM


Wonderful work, Poeminister.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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with you
5 posted 2001-07-05 04:13 PM


PM   as always...love it!  
Titia Geertman
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6 posted 2001-07-05 07:04 PM


tides flowing softly
giving some and taking some
the way love should be

Very lovely senryu you wrote there

Titia


A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 07-05-2001).]

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