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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-07-04 08:36 PM



Your intentions,
tonight they are welcome.
I have no headache.
I have no pain,
except the one that dwells in my heart.
The one that remains,
the one that questions your love.
I'll open my arms,
and embrace you like I've done before.
I'll give you the kiss,
that tells of my love for you.
I'll whisper "I love you", in a very shy tone.
Knowing that loving you,
is painful.


© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
SmittenKitten
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1 posted 2001-07-04 10:35 PM


You are so much like me....it's such a lonely feeling isn't it?  Not being able to share your fears and doubts with the one you love....it is hard to overcome.  Especially when you are shy.
Hugs,
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

JLR
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2 posted 2001-07-05 01:12 AM


Hurts so good.
JLR
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3 posted 2001-07-05 01:12 AM


Hurts so good.
MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2001-07-05 06:08 PM


Walker, this is powerful.  Leaves me with the feeling of a void inside of the heart -- a very heavy weight in the chest...  I hope this resolves for you in a fulfilling way.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2001-07-05 06:39 PM


Oh walker...this touched me so..

"knowing that loving you is painful"

beautiful...

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