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Honor Me
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Honor Me |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Honor me little ways say a lot what is gained what is lost honor me says the man who holds a cup in his hand 30’s came 30’s went some not a nickel to be spent little ways say a lot what is gained what is lost honor me says the vet who fought the war flew the jet 60’s came 60’s went some came home some can’t vent little ways say a lot what is gained what is lost honor me says the wife give and take it’s for life time it comes time it goes don’t know how but keep the vow little ways say a lot what is gained what is lost honor me say the ill hear my words before the will time it comes time it goes with great obey hear my say little ways say a lot what is gained is what remains |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
Very much enjoyed the poem. A little honor goes such a long way. It is truly what remains. Such a fine poem. Roger |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow this is great, makes you stop and think  |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Everyone holds true their honor...regardless of lot in life. Well put and perceived! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
These words say so much, Sunshine..... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sunshine- WOW! This is excellent! I loved every word of this one! Great write!  hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
honor life and our lot in it. Enjoyed! Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I honor your work ... highly. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Excellent poem, Sunshine... very thought-provoking. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
I'm with suthern on this - I see so much in this. It makes me sad in some ways. Well written, Sunshine. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
wonderful writing........ there's so much truth in here..... |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I'm just speechless  Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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