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Madame Poeme
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Madame Poeme |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Madame Poeme I so fashioned you I drew you line for line And no matter how I followed through You were meant to be divine Madame Poeme I so fashioned you From everything I knew I stroked you with the knell of love To ring the song of you Madame Poeme You're in my heart We live in symmetry And if I ever needed hope I'd just ask you read to me Madame Poeme I can hear you now As the day you gave me life You walk with me eternally As my poem and my wife Madame Poeme I do love you so You make my heart resound You’re spirit lives so fluidly This once I write you down Madame Poeme Sleep well my love You’re how I breathe at night Never thinking how to live But loving these words I write My ezboard community Try my lil Forum! [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 07-05-2001).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Such a lucky lady |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
I agree with Paula...a very lucky lady indeed! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ This is just so lovely. I like ... really like your tenderness. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I agree with Marge, your words have such tenderness to them and are so original..always enjoy reading them *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Walt ... there is such a lovely flow to these sentiments, nicely written indeed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Thank you all unfortunately stuff like this keeps ole walt up at night (sleepy) |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
I love reading your poetry! Each time it's different and unique. This was very enjoyable and well written. Debbie |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
the title is most fantasmic! some great abstract thoughts. i think this is kinda fitting... Madame Poeme You're in my heart We live in symmetry And if I ever needed hope I'd just ask you read to me ya thank so... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ahhh Walty, this is so very tender, well done on a beautiful poem m'friend. And no matter how I followed through You were meant to be divine indeed! Maree "little miss understood |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah Walt...Madame poeme sounds like the love of your life for sure and a wonderful reibute this is!! Good stuff! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Madame Poeme took your heart...but still lets you share it with us... thank her, would you? |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Great thoughts and great way to put them to words, my friend. jwesley |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
All lies. All lies. |
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