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MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

0 posted 2001-07-04 09:35 PM

I've written this few years back.....and I don't know why I felt like posting it tonight....

~~*A way and yet close*~~

Away from you
And yet so close
I feel my whole being
Come to an existence

Away from the road untrod
I finally could see the traveler
Who took that road
The man whose soul roamed
Beyond the limits of life
And its inferno
Beyond the boundaries of existence
And its depressing madness
Beyond me…....
The person, the human
Who solved and made the mystery.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Thank you

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

1 posted 2001-07-04 10:32 PM

Away from you
And yet so close
I feel my whole being
Come to an existence

I know the feeling...my fiancee and I have been apart practically our whole relationship...yet we have the closest connection two people can have. Beautiful write Melody!
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

2 posted 2001-07-05 10:10 AM

Thank you ~Krista~

I have written this a long time ago to totally remember the cause behind it.

I'm surely glad that someone has found it true......

Thank you
*************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-07-06 07:33 PM

to solve the mystery of one. . . only to find more questions. . .

an intersting perspective. . . but. . . it's what makes life worth living doesn't it???

well done with this one my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-07-06 08:04 PM

I don't know why you put it here tonight, either, but I received something quite beautiful from it, so please, take my sincere thank you...

and know you did someone a favor today...

Romeo
Junior Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 43

5 posted 2001-07-06 08:28 PM

Hi there

lovely lines and beautiful idea

keep up the good work my dear

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

6 posted 2001-07-06 11:58 PM

Dear~Sven~
Thank you for bringing this one up......

Yes....to solve a mystery only to be more puzzled with more questions......
It surely makes life a complex thing (which it has always been) .......
and worth living??....I'm not totally sure that it always does......

Thank you dearly.....
===================

Dear ~Sunshine~
I'm more than glad that you received something beautiful from it....
It really warms my heart........
So Thank you dear for reading it....

===================
~Romeo~

Thank you dearly...... and I hopefully I will and I wish you would too.....

******************************

[This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 07-06-2001).]

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