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Patchwork Memories |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
It will be cold, Without your Laughing smile, And soft eyes To warm me, So, I am sewing A patchwork quilt, Made from memories of time spent With you, To wrap around My heart When the nights Are frigid. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
To wrap around My heart When the nights Are frigid... and the moon peeks into my shadows... [you inspired, yet again...] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CPatHair~ When I think nostalgic ... I can't think of a better phrase to wrap it up than patchwork quilt~ So I bury myself in it's warmth~ Know that I like it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Nice one! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
here you go again, Cpat, warming our hearts with your tender musings I wrote three amazingly short ones, for me, yesterday on a picnic in the woods. Posted them late last night, foolishly, because I'd been absent all day. Now they have sunken to the depths of the PIP Sea. I tell you this, because SHORT is rarely in my vocab. or my poetry, and you do it so very well, that I thought you might like to know I tried, too.  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
GREAT MY FRIEND...GONNA SHOW THIS TO MY WIFE. JWESLEY |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Minimalisticly beautiful. You have said more with less here. Enjoyed your metaphors. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
you are truly a poet...your words touch me...if you would ever like to write a duet...just send an e mail [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 07-06-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Have I mentined that you have a way with words  Superb. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Deca: Thanks for the comment!! Glad it inspired you! Marge: Thank You.. yes there is something nostalgic and comforting about quilts.. Brad: Thanks! VAS.. and good poems they are too.. I read them and enjoyed them a great deal jwesley: Hope your wife enjoyed.. thanks for the comment Mark: Thanks.. I enjoy minimalistic poems a great deal, and swear one of these days I will get fair at writing them. 1Slick... now what else could a poet ever want to hear? To touch another with our words is what we all hope for I think. As for a duet... I would be happy to try.. Interloper: You bud... are going to give me the big head... I do appreciate the kind words... and I am not sure that my "way woth words" is an equal to yours. Thanks to everyone... for taking time to read and comment!! |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
The sad, sweetness of this is refreshing. Thanks! |
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