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Open Poetry #14

Place

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-07-04 11:24 AM

There Is a place
In a heart,
To give love away,
To live forever,
A place for loving,
A place for everyone to love,
A place to give,
A place for loving,
A place to give a heart away,
There Is a little place,
In your heart,
There Is a love to live,
There a place for a heart to give,
place to give,
Place to give,
heart away,
a plac to stay alive,
P place for living,
A place for a smile,
A place to see,
A place ,
when you find a place to rest,
A place for a best time,
to come,
There Is a place
to follow your heart,
A place to say,
A place to give,
A place to forget,
A place to remember,
A place to love,
A place for loving,
A place for caring,
A place In your heart,

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

1 posted 2001-07-04 11:29 AM

beautifully written Vandana, one of your best. I like your poem a lot.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-07-04 04:30 PM

and I know that you know that place very well my friend. . .

indeed, one of your best. . .

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2001-07-04 06:39 PM

yes...there is a place...helen

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-07-05 11:33 PM

This is nice vandana....James

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