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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-07-05 02:59 PM

my heart shines for you
and you alone

in the darkness of your life
when it seems that
you’ll never know love again
my heart shines for you

through the storms of love
when it seems that
we’ve lost our way
my heart shines for you

across the miles of time
when it seems that
you’ll never see my face
my heart shines for you

in the darkness
through the storms
across the miles

my heart shines for you

and, in the same way

I know that
your heart
shines for me

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-07-05 03:06 PM

Smooth and beautiful romantic poetry Sven!......

               "in the darkness of your life
                 when it seems that
                 you’ll never know love again
                 my heart shines for you"

Sort of like a lighthouse or a beacon signifying security on the turbulent ocean of love!

good stuff as usual!

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-07-05 04:44 PM

Yes it is best when two hearts shine for each other...James

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

3 posted 2001-07-05 04:56 PM

One might read this as coming from friend to friend....just in being there, believing, giving hope....

one just might read it that way....

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2001-07-05 05:11 PM

Your romantic side is showing again Sven...shining heart? Lovely!

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

5 posted 2001-07-05 05:16 PM

Love it...it shines brightly in your words.

PM

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-07-05 07:18 PM

And your verse shines brightly my friend.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2001-07-05 07:26 PM

Lovely words, Sven, beautifully expressed...

*smiles*
~Tier

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

8 posted 2001-07-05 07:27 PM

One can hope...thank you.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

9 posted 2001-07-05 07:55 PM

I really like what Decaflame said...

Whether it's a love or a friendship poem, this is beautiful Sir Sven Pen

Take care,
Melissa~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

10 posted 2001-07-05 08:40 PM

A shining heart, well versed for us to appreciate.
Sandra

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

11 posted 2001-07-05 09:09 PM

Sven,
Hearts that shine so true and bright, will always be aglow as one, no matter how far the distance... A beautiful light to illuminate the soul.
Love, Elise

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

12 posted 2001-07-05 09:16 PM

ethome, you've got the idea my friend. . . thank you. . .

James, yes it is, the light that shines then is wonderful. . . thank you . . .

Decaflame, one could read it that way. . . and if you have, then you've found a whole new meaning. . . thank you my friend. . .

serenity, again?? Sheesh, I thought I had that side taken care of??

. . . thank you. . .

PM, thank you. . . glad that I could share with you. . .

Interloper, as brightly as your repsonse. . . thank you. . .

Tier, always nice to see you my friend. . . thank you for your words. . .

JLR, there is always hope. . . never forget that. . .

Melissa, I do too. . . and thank you for reading my friend. . .

Sandra, thank you so much my friend. . .

Elise, yes they will, and I hope that you have one to shine for you. . . thank you. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Lisann
Member

since 2001-01-31

Posts 350

13 posted 2001-07-05 11:06 PM

Damn I wish my husband could write or even say stuff like this to me. oh wait, that is for dating people. once you are married it is ......."are you still here?" Just kidding. I liked this Sven. It was sweet.

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

14 posted 2001-07-05 11:14 PM

A very generous heart it would seem. Enjoyed.

"Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve"

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

15 posted 2001-07-05 11:32 PM

Sven, you always have the most beautiful work. Someone is so lucky to have you.

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

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