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Swallow Of Moon
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Swallow Of Moon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Swallow Of Moon ~*Marge Tindal*~ Tiny Sips are simply not enough to quench this thirst of moon I need to swig a swallow and I need to do it soon ~ pop a top and drink my fill as full as I can go ~ it's the only way that I can think of on this night ~ to see I get it right her glow now serves to make me mellow and I'm in thirst for a taste of yellow ~ gulping quickly for I think that she's the grandest drink ~ and she fills me so ~ bright the fizzy has me in a pure tizzy so I drink in her merriment knowing full-well she is heaven sent ~ to tease my senses with her tantalizing glow ~ so I take a long swill and savor her still before she must go ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
To take a swallow of the moon will cause unrest, for you will aways have that heavenly quest to pull that silvery globe to your breast....gentle smile |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah hah! You did have a full moon there tonight too  , and did you write of it well. Loved this creative full moon tonight Marge.If I made you smile today then I did my job! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- loving this, my moon-loving friend... i just adore the moon...  hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-04-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This just bubbled all over the page....leaving miles of smiles behind.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Mello-Yellow Margie and her luna love ... what perfect poetic partnership... and WE are the lucky ones who get to watch them both shine   meWe're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I took one big gulp of this poem, and loved it  I love it when your clever lil' muse tells you to pen "shape" poems You write of the magic of Luna well~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge good lord girl! May your imagination never cease! Just when I think there cannot be another poetry about the moon that is different... here comes Marge popping the top! Love it. Hugs, Deb |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, The sipping of the luna moon Is highly toxic in the noon. *L* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ How poetic you wax ! I'm sippin' ! Mysteria~ LOL ! You're a card ! Vicky~ Me too ! Does it show ? Karilea~ It's spritzing full tonight ! JanetMarie~ Awwwwwwww ! It IS mellow-yellow isn't it ? Melissa~ I shall endeavor to be clever~ finding shapes within flow from Luna's pen~ BloomingRose~ Plop ! Plop! Fizz ! Fizz ! What a refreshing moon it is ! Seymour~ LOL ! I slept it off ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl you're right beloved sister I do indeed like a lot. Fabulous work as always. I love it, I always love your moon shapes, and this is utterly fabulous my sweetest sister. Just sooooooo good, absooutely excellent love and warm stuff Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Marge this is so clever! I love it! Do you think you could save a sip for my mayhaps? Just a tiny one!"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Marge this is so clever! I love it! Do you think you could save a sip for me mayhaps? Just a tiny one!"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
woops....I guess you can't click "stop" and fix your mistakes....now I've done it! Sorry Marge! |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Marge, I love the moon and this was a beautiful way of "taking it all in" shall I say? 'pop a top and drink my fill' That's what I feel like I am doing each time I look at the moon! Love it! Hugs Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--the moon is making magic tonight...so are you. (PS thanks for the edit) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ May the moonlight greet you in gentle glow. SmittenKitten~ Tee-Hee ! I like all three replies, dearie.  Never STOP ! Cindi~ Glad to pop-a-top with you anytime. Martie~ Much moon magic~ *anytime* *Hugs* to all ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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