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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-07-03 09:35 PM



Far Beyond The Poetry

~*Marge Tindal*~

Far beyond the poetry
fathoms beneath the rhyme
You each took my heart in friendship
treasured for all time

On oscillating glow of beam
from the lighthouse of your souls
found me floundering in rough waters
Thank you for guiding me home

Hands across the ocean
anchoring my dreams
Baptismal in calm waters
on the Isle of Everseem

Cherish of the sisterships
found in Passions Paradise by the Bay
Thank you, sisters of my heart
for being here, always in all ways

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-07-03 09:38 PM


Hay, whut about us brudders, cousin?
Wonderful heartfelt work for your gr8 friends  

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 07-03-2001).]

Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-07-03 09:39 PM


no use in trying
to hide it
Marge's lights are
beams that guide us
straight on toward
the narrows
even men find
the arrows
aiming
straight
toward
her
heart

do not think
it is just
women who seek
the us
but men too,
who hold in hand
the poems
on which
we stand

united, we
write
divided, we
pale

Marge, a center
on whose words
we
Hail

Honeybee
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3 posted 2001-07-03 09:42 PM



Marge, I love this, just like I cherish our friendship!  You're a real  

Take care,
Melissa~

Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2001-07-03 09:44 PM


I do hope I'm one of them Marge, you always brighten my day (sorry! night)

Really must hit the sack now, dawn will be here in about an hour.

How do I explain that on my work? I just don't, they won't understand, they already think I'm crazy.

Thanks to you dear friend Marge

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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SmittenKitten
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5 posted 2001-07-03 09:48 PM


Marge, this is beautiful...I haven't been here long but you've made me feel quite at home with your kind comments and easy smile.  Not to mention your poems!    

You are truly a kind soul,
*hugs*
~Krista

Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 2001-07-03 10:00 PM


Marge

Far beyond your poetry
Into the depths of soul
The true regard for love and life
In eloquence extolled

You honor us with poetry
In which you pay respect
That we would give in a time of need
More love than you'd expect

I couldn't help but realize
While reading this fine verse
The anchor, dear's been held by you
Your thoughts are in reverse

For you have been the beacon
For all the poets here
The honor of the light of love
Belongs to you, it's clear

But your poem is beautiful, the title is wonderful, and the tribute is beyond words
Liz



Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2001-07-03 11:06 PM


Oh, InterLoper~
I do love my 'brudders' ...
It's just that today was such an overwhelming outpour from my sisters ...
I hold you all in my heart.

Karilea~
Just look at you quipping so eloquently !
Love you, lady !

Melissa~
I only fly lifted on the wings of angels like you.

Titia~
Oh, believe me .. you are !

SmittenKitten~
You've been here 'long enough' to be gathered in the sister-circle !
Welcome.

LizzieLady~
You've made me cry .. but it's okay ...
I'm getting used to it.
Such a lovely, lovely verse, dear lady.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

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8 posted 2001-07-03 11:21 PM


Yes, we do make some wonderful friends here, don't we?  Beautiful write, Marge...I love it!

sp  

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
9 posted 2001-07-03 11:39 PM




Oh......~*Marge*~
Dearest Marge..........
This so sweetly touching........and lovely.......

and you are right......


Far beyond the poetry there
where our words belong.....
I found your hearts near
I found a lovely place to belong.....


I just hope I belong to this lovely circle..... ...

Thank you dear.......
*********************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

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10 posted 2001-07-04 12:10 PM


Ahh, Marge, that was sweet and very heartfelt to all your sisters out there, hmmm, do we get included someplace, since a beard looked back at me in the mirror, geez...very gentle smile
Paula Finn
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11 posted 2001-07-04 01:04 AM


You are the one who is always there...with a ready hug and smile...thank you dear lady....
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12 posted 2001-07-04 02:25 AM


I LOVE YOU SISTER FRIEND


May I just say "ditto" to what Elizabeth said, (boy does she say things well, and the way Iwould say them if I even could say them that way!)  Hope that made sense?  Anyway, you dear lady, have it backasswards!  It is you who is all things to all people, and always there with a helping hand, attentive ear, or encouraging word for anyone.  However, how lovely of you give friends a gentle tap on the shoulder, as sometimes that just feels so darn good!  Gee whiz, after all this blabbering I sure hope I'm in that circle of friends, if not I think I will probably just be sneaking in, 'cause I luvs ya little beacon Margie!  Very tender poem.



If I made you smile today then I did my job!
 ~* Mysteria *~

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 07-04-2001).]

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13 posted 2001-07-04 02:30 AM


SweetPoetFriendMarge, all I can say is muahhhhh on cheeks N hugsssss2u cuz your heart N spirit reaches thru these pages blue and touches me each time I read a verse written in Margie's maroon hue...

Luv ya
*~coco~*

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14 posted 2001-07-04 03:05 AM



Marge, my friend, it's plain to see
could be no clearer view
what makes your friendship special is
the treasure that is YOU

that light you see within my soul
is not what it would seem
it's merely a reflection of
your own heart's radiant beam

no length of land nor water
will seperate our hearts
they reach beyond expanded miles
and so a friendship starts

right here in passions cove i'll stay
a friend shall be my role
and you, sweet friend, will ever be
the sister of my soul


Marge-
What a beautifully  penned piece of your heart..    
I really must echo what the other sisters have
said...it is YOU who makes friendship special.
You need to know just how much you've done for me
in the time i've been here at passions.
Not only were you one of the first to make me
feel welcome here, but you didn't stop there.
Your loving words, friendly smiles, and
constant encouragement have meant more to me
than I could ever express in mere words.  
I feel so fortunate to be able to call you
my friend..   YOU are what friendship is all about!  
You are the bestestest!!!  

Love you bunches, my sister..    
~vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-04-2001).]

Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2001-07-04 03:24 AM


SnowPants~
Yes, we do indeed ... and I'm glad you're here. Thank you.

MyEnchantedMelody~
You sing the sister-song ! Thank you.

Logan~
LOL !  Look at you surrounding yourself with the sisters !
Smart man !
Love ya' ... beard and all !

Paula~
Awww !  Only cause you all have my heart !
*Hugs*, sweetie !

Mysteria~
See ... you DO have a sister ! !
Backasswards ? Is that like unique.
LOL !  Thank you, girlie !

CocoBaci~
And this heart is glad to see you, little sister.
Thanks for joining in !

Vicky~
And you ... precious you~
Such a wonderful poetic reply that I will hold dear to my heart.
Love ya' bunches !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

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16 posted 2001-07-05 08:19 AM


wonderful!!



touching, heartfelt, and real...!
i loved it.... thank you
i especially liked the "Isle of Everseem"
excellent!

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17 posted 2001-07-05 02:02 PM


Girlfriend, I always look forward to reading your poetry. Though I strayed for a while in surfing the net, I am drawn back to my roots of pen in hand, and I must say your poetry inspires like no other. I laugh, I cry, I read in awe. There's no poet like Marge!
No matter how busy your pen, you always offer friendship and For this I thank you.
Your the best!  

Hugs,
Deb

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18 posted 2001-07-05 02:16 PM


Tinkle, Tinkle, sweetly star,
I like your poem from afar,
You always write the perfect word,
Among the best, that's ever heard.

(forgive me please, I have momentarily lost the intellect side of the brain.)
p.s.  Twas an excellent poem btw...

cpalmer
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19 posted 2001-07-05 02:18 PM


Margie! Margie
We are here for you always
Love ya friend
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

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20 posted 2001-07-05 02:20 PM


This is a fitting tribute to the great ladies here, including YOU Marge..as one of the sisters of soul.....we have all had an SOS a time or two here. Thanks for being there!  
vlraynes
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21 posted 2001-07-05 03:06 PM



Marge-
   just had to come back for another
   sisterly read...
   i just love this...and YOU!  

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



LngJhnAg
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22 posted 2001-07-05 03:10 PM


Arrgghhhh, me Lassie, I be boardin' ya nows that ye are on my seas *clump clump clump as I draw nearer*.  Tis a fine little ditty ye have penned 'ere.
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23 posted 2001-07-05 04:27 PM


Marge--Sweet sister, how did I miss seeing this before?  Wonderful feeling behind this, I say..you're the best!  Hugs!
Marge Tindal
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24 posted 2001-07-07 01:47 AM


Doreen~
Welcome to the 'Isle Of Everseem'.

BloomingRose~
Awwwwww !  You make me feel like a million bucks !

Mike~
LOL @ 'Tinkle-Tinkle' ...

Cindi~
You're a God-Send ... Thank you.

PoetdeVine~
Holding - Sharing
Enfolding - Caring
Thank you.

Vicky~
I love you muchly ! !

LongJohn~
Thankee, gimpy !

Martie~
No, you all are the best ...
I'm just LUCKY !
And speaking of Lucky ... heard anything ????
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

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