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I Remember
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I Remember |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
"I Remember" The doctor said you were Getting better You looked so beatiful Going out that day on The water I didn't say goodbye And thoughts of that Make me want to cry I remember the disbelieve Of hearing that you died All I could do is sit, Stare, and cry He came in, eyes watery Sighed, knelt and kissed My knee and said " I'm sorry Baby" I couldn't believe you Were gone, the shock Remained a while all The time we hugged and cried I looked around at our familar Things and couldn't believe That you I'd never again see I'm sure we all thought it Couldn't be, but when I saw You in your casket a wave Of sadness felt like it Drowned me To look at you was all I could do let alone breathe You were a wonderful person And now my Gaurdian angel I feel you are I'm still filled with grief and sorrow and at times feel hollow You were my heart, my guidance My light and now your gone Ripped cruley from my life I remember the people coming To say how they were sorry All I could think of was the Knife twisting in my heart Causing me pain I wish I could have gone With you to see your loveley Blue eyes look into mine To hold your hand one last time To say I love you and goodbye All of what I've said is no lie And I remember your happy smile When you said "Go back to sleep Honey everything will be alright" Dedicated To: My mom who passed away when I was 12. It's good to be back, anyone miss me? LoL. I will be here more often or atleast try to be, I'm not online much anymore. Take care everyone!  Lisa~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hey Lisa, I missed you. . .  glad to see you back. . . I understand the loss that you show in this one. . . I lost my Dad when I was 10. . . you showed it very well here. . . hope to see more of you. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Lisa, My heart goes out to you. I have lost both my mother and father. I know that hurt and lonely feeling very well. You've done a good job here describing it. Thank you for sharing this. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lisa, Hey baby! Good to see you here sweet sis of mine. Excellent work as always. I cried when I read this...though you have shared this one with me before, it still hits me everytime. Mom would be so proud of the wonderful and beautiful young lady that you have turned into!! Just know that she is with us both always, and she is smiling down!! Love you honey!! Love, Amy "but i see your true colors, |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Sven: Thanks for reading my poem. I'm sorry about your Dad, you were even younger than me. It's good to know someone thought of me while I was gone. Take care. Auguste: I can't imagine what it would feel like to lose both your mom and dad, sorry for your loss! I'm glad you liked how I expressed my feelings. Take care. Amy: Thanks for responding to my poem. I'm sure now that your right, mom is looking down on us and would be proud of both of us, or atleast I hope she is. Love ya! ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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