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Passions of Youth |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Passions of Youth Virginia Salter river shore sand, grasses delicious kisses vibrant caresses teen libido indecent proposal shaky, timid request more caresses more verdant request sand gravel grasses, bugs innocence, fear liar’s promise ensues leave me be next time next time I’ll show my love next time let’s go now next time. . . home safe canceled date. . . canceled relationship good choice fear gone © July 7, 2000 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
all the mixed feelings and fears.... interesting form VAS.. I enjoyed |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Much wisdom within your thoughts nicely written  Rex |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Safety of home sounds like a good choice to me. I did like the words used here though to describe the setting. Very nice. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I like this one allot! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
You did this well, and captured the mood very well I think. enjoyed.. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Love it Vas! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Nicely expressed, it can be hard to resist. |
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