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PoemCrazy
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0 posted 2001-06-06 12:35 PM


low-tech poet

don't expect bells and whistles,
i've only got Rainbows, Dreams, and Love.

things you just can't buy anywhere.

i won't dazzle you with flashing lights,
or things that go "boink!".

even though those're cute.

i've got my pen,
i've got my pad,

and i've got my heart.

all the things i need,
to make poetry.


(edited because it ate the brackets i put around a sound effect)...tom

[This message has been edited by PoemCrazy (edited 06-06-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Tom - All Rights Reserved
Poeminister
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1 posted 2001-06-06 01:20 AM


I like this.  Well done!


wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
2 posted 2001-06-06 01:35 AM


woohoo and Oh Yuh
kaile
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singapore
3 posted 2001-06-06 07:47 AM


you made your point and i agree with you
Cpat Hair
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4 posted 2001-06-06 08:33 AM


nice work.. enjoyed
Paula Finn
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missouri
5 posted 2001-07-04 03:50 AM


all the bells and whistles cant compete with wonderful poetry
doreen peri
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6 posted 2001-07-05 09:33 AM


indeed!! that's all you need!! enjoyed this much!!
PoemCrazy
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7 posted 2001-07-05 02:59 PM


Hi!

(i could never find my posts one i'd posted them, so i didn't respond to responders. anyway...)

Poeminister: thanks!

wayoutwalt: dude!  

faterider: thanks. hey didn't you say you were going to do a poem about your name?

Cpat Hair:  thanks! do you prefer Cpat or Capt?

Paula: hey you, you're responding to my old poems and then others read 'em and respond and now i'm trying to keep up with responses!

doreen: thanks, from you, that's really a compliment.

ok, off to find a few more poems from my books...tom

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