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JLR
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0 posted 2001-05-24 09:08 AM


I’m so Hungry

I’m so hungry
but there’s nothing in the fridge
except waffles, eggs and pepperoni
fresh garlic, a bottle of vodka
maybe an onion, habenaro
and though I’m quite brave
when it comes to omelets
perhaps I’d best go back to bed


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1 posted 2001-05-24 09:09 AM


Why, I see a whole buffet in there....let's get with it, now I am hungry, too!
1slick_lady
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2 posted 2001-05-24 09:38 AM


i like scrambled , please
Titia Geertman
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3 posted 2001-05-24 10:17 AM


Sounds like my lunch, except for the Vodka, oh well throw it in too, let's party.

Nice poem, nice food, I enjoyed.

Titia

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4 posted 2001-05-24 10:23 AM


*big smiles* love this, I went through the weekend like that, kept being hungry, but NOT for what was available.....lol
Morgoth
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5 posted 2001-05-24 10:24 AM


I feel the same way when it comes to breakfast, I usually say, what the hell and go back to bed.

ParisGrl
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6 posted 2001-05-24 02:53 PM


R.J.

I'm hungry now......lol   loved this one.  

Irish Rose
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7 posted 2001-05-24 02:54 PM


order Chinese
Saunni
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8 posted 2001-05-24 02:57 PM


Cool poem! Well, lets see...if I was there I could cook you something. lol. I don't cook well, my friend, but I would sure try.   I enjoyed this.

Sauni

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S Arthur Grey
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9 posted 2001-05-24 06:07 PM


hmmmm
I could handle the hot omelete...would make the waffle edible...
But the Gimlet?  I'd pass on that.
On the other hand, I've never done a breakfast poem...
hmmmm again, and thanks for the idea.

S Arthur

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trees tumble out of twigs and sticks;
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walker
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10 posted 2001-05-24 08:09 PM


I'm hungry and sleepy, cute one JLR!
VAS
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11 posted 2001-05-24 09:36 PM


It seems to me you could make up quite a delicacy with those ingredients, and if it didn't turn out quite that way, if you thread through between sips/gulps of vodka, who would care?  

Enjoyed playing here with this one.

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12 posted 2004-05-21 01:29 PM


cute
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