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Open Poetry #14

Going Nowhere

rascalx
Senior Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 590
Florence, SC, USA

0 posted 2001-07-02 10:59 PM

Going Nowhere

An angry vexation
An empty yearning
A yawning chasm of incomprehensibility

An infinity of vacuum
A great space of nothingness
A spinning loom weaving intangibility

A never ending search for a never-never land
And a voyage to infinity never planned
for an impossibility

or a one way ticket
to lunacy

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2001-07-02 11:24 PM

I'll take one, please! IN FIRST CLASS!

I like this.

FiGHT_aGaiNST_FoRM
Junior Member

since 2001-05-01

Posts 13
aMeRiCa

2 posted 2001-07-03 02:52 AM

frickin' A...i already have my ticket...tremendous read!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-07-03 08:44 AM

good read... and nicely done.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-07-03 06:56 PM

welcome. . . we're glad that you could join us here. . . will that be smoking or non-smoking???

I like this one Jeff. . . probing. . .

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Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

5 posted 2001-07-03 06:57 PM

Enjoyed this...nicely done.

mysecretfantaC
New Member

since 2001-07-01

Posts 2

6 posted 2001-07-04 08:18 PM

Interesting....

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