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. . . Love . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Love cannot be bought, it is a gift from one to another Love must be earned once given, else love can be lost forever Love should be worn proudly like a lace gown, it should not smother Love joins two people, it can never be used as a lever Love must be returned, else it will die a slow, tormented death Love must be mutual, it cannot be just a one way street Love must be shared, for unshared love too soon will take its last breath Love must be exchanged, it will not live in only one retreat Love is fragile, it must be treated with care and a caring Love is delicate, it must be handled with understanding Love is tender, kindness is needed with a dash of daring Love is intimate, it needs just two people for the branding Love becomes the growing bond between a woman and a man Love overcomes most obstacles like no other feeling can. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 07-02-2001).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is very wise and soothing, of course, I love it  I've been in a romantic/loving mood lately and this was perfect~Take care, Melissa~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Very nice reminder, thank you! And I like to think of love as an action verb!  Lots of wisdom interloper! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper, I think you coverd the subject very well. I can't think of anything to add. Good write. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Melissa ~ I hope you enjoy your holiday. Thanks for the read and kind comments  serenity ~ That's me, the wise ole Interloper Sy ~ OK my friend ... thanx |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Love is wonderful and gives up the most treasured memories. Very nice, Interloper. All writing comes |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Well my friend... I think now I shall give up on writing of love..you have explained it all so very well here... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lone Wolf ~ Yes, it does. Thanx for the read Ron ~ Well, I guess you can write of love, given your obvious limitations, should you feel the need. Just Email me and I will explain the complexities as you feel the need to learn If you only knew how wide the smile is on my face right now my friend. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful and true to the core. PM |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So true, and a lot of good advice within, should anyone want to look for it. Love is..everything I guess. Sandra |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
PM ~ Thank you very much catalinamoon ~ Good observation, and from 26 miles from shore |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Love, the growing bond, overcomes.... Well done sir, well done, indeed.... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Love is magic this is soft, Interloper.....I like this very much |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Interloper--A wonderful look into a subject that so many try to explain...I think you have done it well. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Love is just a word unless you share it. Thank you for sharing. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Deca ~ Yes, it does. Doesn't it? SEA ~ Yes, it is. Isn't it? Martie ~ Why, thank you. inot2B ~ Absolutely Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
love is kind, love is caring, love is something that we shared.... love is wonderful |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, it is all that and more....what would we do without it !!! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Oh, how I've lived so many of these lines The truth is spoken here with n lovely poetic voice You conjured up pain and joy as I read through this poem Excellent Liz |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Interloper, I would respond, but, friend you said it all too well, a tip of my boonie I said once before, you have a mission, you are performing it well, sir...gentle smile |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
vandana ~ Right on! Colleen ~ I don't ever want to find out Liz ~ I'm glad you enjoyed, at least some of it ... the happy parts Logan ~ I've never had a boonie tipped to me before Thank you for your most kind comments.Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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