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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-07-02 10:40 PM

Summer Senryus

katy did you come
to sing my summer through me
grandest noise alive

lightning’s golden glow
in smallest system brightly
yards alight with life

summer swing freely
head back feet point heavenly
to be young again

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 07-02-2001).]

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2001-07-02 10:43 PM

Hmmm...being thoughtful here...When I grow up, Sunshine, I want to write just like you!

jwesley

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-07-02 10:44 PM

Oh, the memories this brings. Wonderful, Sunshine!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

3 posted 2001-07-02 10:47 PM

ahh you're always young when you're swinging your heart out with toes pointed to the sky

this is a wonderful summertime poem! It just warms the heart

~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-07-03 03:33 PM

Beautifully done, Sunshine

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-07-06 08:11 PM

*brushes the dust off*

don't mind me my friend. . . just looking around back here. . . these are wonderful. . . summer memories. . . just what I need today. . .

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Member Seraphic

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