Open Poetry #14 |
... No Words ... |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
have I to softly say on moments such as this you've read my heart and know that I am desirous of your kiss no words have I in utterance of plead to break this spell of quiet need held in a moment of enraptured bliss knowing I long for your sweet kiss no words have I ~*Marge Tindal*~ © 2001 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Ah, yes the magic of a kiss leaves anyone speechless! So well penned, Marge! Take care, Melissa~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Oh Marge it's beautiful! That moment before a kiss is almost as good as the kiss itself isn't it? ...almost! ~Krista |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Geez, Marge, you don't have need of words. It seems to me that you got it where you want it...gentle smile |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Just wonderful Marge...nothing quiet like a kiss is there?? Don't know of anyone that wants them to end. jwesley |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- a tender write, with a definite undertone of sadness. beautiful as always.. great big warm fuzzy hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-02-2001).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, the day you have no words, FIU will beat the Seminoles |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Thank you, hon. SmittenKitten~ almost Logan~ *big smiles* JWesley~ And that's the truth. Vicky~ Big {{{{{ }}}}} back to you. Balladeer~ Ain't gonna happen ! Which sport, sport ? Men's Soccer Women's Soccer Volleyball Men's Basketball Women's Basketball Baseball I think we can take 'em all on at once - and come out victorious ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Marge...you simply leave me with.... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
marge - This is a very sweet poem. The phrasing has a twist to it that makes it even sweeter. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Weaver of words, I loved this, it was beautifully done and kinda bittersweet? If I made you smile today then I did my job! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ Perfect reply .... LongJohn~ I thank you for allowing it to gently twist into your thoughts. Mysteria~ Not a 'bitter' in the house .... It's ALL sweet ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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