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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-07-02 08:11 PM



have I to softly say
on moments such as this
you've read my heart
and know that I
am desirous of your kiss
no words have I in utterance of plead
to break this spell of quiet need
held in a moment of enraptured bliss
knowing I long for your sweet kiss
no words have I

~*Marge Tindal*~ © 2001



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Honeybee
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1 posted 2001-07-02 08:17 PM



Ah, yes the magic of a kiss leaves anyone speechless!  So well penned, Marge!  

Take care,
Melissa~

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2 posted 2001-07-02 08:36 PM


Oh Marge it's beautiful!    
That moment before a kiss is almost as good as the kiss itself isn't it?  ...almost!
~Krista

Logan
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3 posted 2001-07-02 10:18 PM


Geez, Marge, you don't have need of words. It seems to me that you got it where you want it...gentle smile
jwesley
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4 posted 2001-07-02 10:28 PM


Just wonderful Marge...nothing quiet like a kiss is there??  Don't know of anyone that wants them to end.

jwesley

vlraynes
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5 posted 2001-07-02 10:30 PM



Marge-
   a tender write, with a definite
   undertone of sadness.
   beautiful as always..

   great big warm fuzzy hugs,
   ~vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-02-2001).]

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6 posted 2001-07-02 10:31 PM


Marge, the day you have no words, FIU will beat the Seminoles  
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2001-07-03 01:38 AM


Melissa~
Thank you, hon.

SmittenKitten~
almost

Logan~
*big smiles*

JWesley~
And that's the truth.

Vicky~
Big {{{{{ }}}}} back to you.

Balladeer~
Ain't gonna happen !
Which sport, sport ?

Men's Soccer
Women's Soccer
Volleyball
Men's Basketball
Women's Basketball
Baseball

I think we can take 'em all on at once -
and come out victorious !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 2001-07-03 11:14 AM


Marge...you simply leave me with....
LngJhnAg
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9 posted 2001-07-03 11:21 AM


marge - This is a very sweet poem.  The phrasing has a twist to it that makes it even sweeter.
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10 posted 2001-07-03 04:13 PM


Weaver of words, I loved this, it was beautifully done and kinda bittersweet?

If I made you smile today then I did my job!
 ~* Mysteria *~

Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2001-07-03 10:46 PM


LadyInWhite~
Perfect reply ....

LongJohn~
I thank you for allowing it to gently twist into your thoughts.

Mysteria~
Not a 'bitter' in the house ....
It's ALL sweet !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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