Open Poetry #14 |
Dancing In Your Eyes |
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Let me dance with the Devil I see in your eyes, There’s mystery hidden But that’s no surprise. Dance with him now Through the ashes of Hell, If the lips that are sealed Their secrets would tell. Let me play with the Angels I know hide in there, For surely inside I feel you must care. Are they hiding in cages Forged out of steel, From pain that you’ve felt Imagined or real? Let me dance with the Devil You show me so well, For living without you Is living in hell. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Oh surely the angels have escaped by now! Enjoyed this VERY much.... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ah, but the Devil WAS an angel .... once |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Two replies, huh? Surely this one fell without being noticed. Time to send it back up for a second ride. I enjoyed this Cpat. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sound like one heck of a dance to me! Oh, to be loved like that! I loved this one, a twist from dark to romance, very good, but then all of yours are, thank you. "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
just shows the two sides that lie in every woman. . . and every man. . . it's a dance that never ends. . . excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
A devil...... An angel....... You have expressed the two pictures beautifully.... Thank you ********************** It's only me.......only me |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*chuckles* you KNOW that I love this! ~Tier |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
Yes! |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Kewl poem. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Let me dance with the Devil I see in your eyes, There’s mystery hidden But that’s no surprise." * make it a slow one and you're on! Loved this |
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