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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-06-28 08:59 AM




Let me dance with the Devil
I see in your eyes,
There’s mystery hidden
But that’s no surprise.

Dance with him now
Through the ashes of Hell,
If the lips that are sealed
Their secrets would tell.

Let me play with the Angels
I know hide in there,
For surely inside
I feel you must care.

Are they hiding in cages
Forged out of steel,
From pain that you’ve felt
Imagined or real?

Let me dance with the Devil
You show me so well,
For living without you
Is living in hell.

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1 posted 2001-06-28 09:06 AM


Oh surely the angels have escaped by now!  Enjoyed this VERY much....
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-06-28 09:11 AM


Ah, but the Devil WAS an angel .... once
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3 posted 2001-06-29 12:38 PM


Two replies, huh?  Surely this one fell without being noticed.  Time to send it back up for a second ride.  I enjoyed this Cpat.

Michael

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There is more depth to the heart than the human mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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4 posted 2001-06-29 11:29 PM


Sound like one heck of a dance to me!  Oh, to be loved like that!  I loved this one, a twist from dark to romance, very good, but then all of yours are, thank you.

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

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5 posted 2001-06-30 10:29 AM


just shows the two sides that lie in every woman. . . and every man. . . it's a dance that never ends. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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6 posted 2001-06-30 09:09 PM




A devil......
An angel.......

You have expressed the two pictures beautifully....

Thank you
**********************


It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

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7 posted 2001-07-01 10:34 AM


*chuckles*

you KNOW that I love this!

~Tier

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8 posted 2001-07-02 11:38 AM


Yes!
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9 posted 2001-07-03 10:26 PM


Kewl poem.
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10 posted 2001-07-03 11:44 PM


"Let me dance with the Devil
I see in your eyes,
There’s mystery hidden
But that’s no surprise."


* make it a slow one and you're on!  

Loved this  

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