»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #14
»
Four Haiku
| Open Poetry #14 |
|
Four Haiku |
|
|
Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
~~ the sun shines brightly through my window as the cat basks in golden light ~~ the evergreen leaves sway gently in the warm breeze rustling so softly ~~ the mighty river swiftly flows by as I sit in contemplation ~~ mother earth explodes in brilliant hues before me as I watch in awe ~~ All writing comes |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Jennifer L. Garcia - All Rights Reserved | |||
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You know I prefer this form of expression over most. Well done indeed  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
||
|
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done..I love the images of nature and you captured them well.. |
||
|
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wonderful! I enjoyed being there with you, I saw and felt as you, it seems so, anyway. Your words were so clearly woven. |
||
|
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh my, Oh my, these are beauties. Haikus and senryus deserve a forum of their own don't you think? Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
||
|
lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
Four GOOD Haiku Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
||
|
Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Very good.... |
||
|
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
LW- this is simply beautiful work hon. this isnt just 4 haikus. 4 brilliant and stunning ones at that. soft smilesyour way for these. take care. amy "but i see your true colors, |
||
|
Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely images, I liked these very much. PM |
||
|
Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
lansing must be very pretty right now!! brilliant images in those haikus... what a summertime vibe. i envy you... i can't do those things. hehehe. "You gotta love livin 'cause dyin's a pain in the ass." |
||
|
Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Now it's nice to see you doing this form and you did a great job! |
||
|
Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Interloper: I agree, haiku is a great change of pace. Cpat Hair: Nature is truly glorious. Thanks. VAS: Then I have done well with these. Thanks for sharing the journey! Titia: You'd never get me out of there if we had a forum for these! LOL. lunatic: Thank you! Decaflame: Amy: I am humbled by your reply, my friend. They made me smile too. Poeminister: Thanks! Ethan: Hey there! Lansing has its moments at times. LOL. I bet you could do these things if you wanted. Kathleen: I've always loved haiku, sweetheart. They were the first form I ever wrote poetry in. And you know I have a soft spot for nature. Thanks much! All writing comes |
||
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sheesh did you notice? It is a "four-haiku" kind of day, you, Sunshine, me, Titia did three. Hmmm, we all violated the one on a page thingee and got away with it, maybe I can post the other 300 here quicker! LOL...these were absolutely beautiful, and descriptive to a 't'. |
||
|
Lisa Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 88Lunenburg,VT USA |
Lovely |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
