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Walking The Walk |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Walking The Walk ~*Marge Tindal*~ Walking the plains of the past in the glow of a sapphire moon recalling ones who went before Seeking my place in the sun On my journey through life Across the land of dreams I pause in the shadows of the mystic moors reflecting a moment body, heart and soul of all I've yet to be ~Thanks to the following poets for the inspirational locations~ Sunshine-A Whisper's Caress-DGVarner-ThUnDeRkYsS My_Enchanted Melody-Professor Gloom-Janet Marie-Jesse Jaymz ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice Marge, captive to me |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- this is beautiful, and so softly written. i'm loving it..  hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's a list of pure hrearted poets you have listed Marge. They inspired you so very well, because this is beautifully written and it says so much! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
EXQUISITE Liz |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"of all I've yet to be" Beautiful Marge ... the ending leaves such anticipation of what is "yet to be". An inspiring read to begin the morn, thank you. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
love the ending..nicely done indeed! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And I see the ending as the beginning! Beautiful Marge. "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PassingShadows~ Thank you for enjoying it. Vicky~ Their thoughts - my pen - what a joy to be a poet !  ETHome~ Thank you for acknowledging the poets. Each of the italicized lines represent their locations as listed in their profiles. I just felt they held a message for me to expound upon. Thank you for the read and reply ... always. Lizzie~ Thank you, dear lady. Kit~ Yes ... such possibilities exist in each of us. Thank you so much for enjoying it. CPatHair~ I appreciate your reply. Mysteria~ Yes, my friend. I move toward the end ... to begin. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Margie...this is very cool...and Im sorry I missed it...with the comp probs I cant keep up and I know Im missing a lot and I hate that... this is clever and you never cease to amaze me the places you get your inspiration from...my muse is so limited... you find poetry everywhere you look so come see me in the mystic sometime  Randy knows the way *WINKIE* LOL |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Stirring all the ingredients in a big bowl and then coming out with a very tasty cake, Well done, Marge...gentle smile |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
... and talking the talk, too |
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autumn Junior Member
since 2001-06-08
Posts 44Maine |
Llike an unfinished melody. The best is yet to come. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well now lookee here...at this wide smile pasted on my face as I joined you in this walk today.... you certainly know how to make the Sun sparkle just a bit brighter.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ I sit the mystic with you often Sipping that raspberry tea Loving that 'Randy' ... who we KNOW is a dandy and write such devine poetry !  Logan~ I baked the cake ... you bring the ice cream.(Raspberry Delight) Thank you ! InterLoper~ You just walk yourself on over to this party ! Autumn~ Just love those unfinished melodies~ Thank you. Karilea~ Thank YOU for the smile of inspiration in my thinking I don't know what I'd do without a little splash to be inking ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: This is lovely! What you are today, is already awesome! Betty Lou Hebert |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Trully wonderful poem of hope.Thanks! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ What a sweetheart you are ! Muuuuwaaaaaaaaaah !  Walker~ Thank you loads. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
I gaze in awe upon your verse and form of inspiration the way you joined this lot of words and blessed them with relation A hint of this, some magic dust a dash of that now have we a hint of that poetic lust you really are quite dazzling Thank you for sharing this with us Marge, I truly enjoyed it  Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ThUnDeRkYsS~ What a lovely verse of reply~ Thank you for sharing it with me. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Dear ~*Marge*~ Such a delightful walk....... I missed seeing this as early as I should but I'm glad I saw it now...... You have really penned it beautifully.....and I've really loved the thought-provoking ending.... Thank you my dear friend...... ************************* It's only me.......only me |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--how unique...how did you ever think of this...I guess because you're clever..It is wonderful, just like you! |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
This is beautiful...may I walk with you sometime? I love how you see things. |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
*hugs* thank you for writing this hun. i am hounered that i inspired you. it makes me feel very special. thank you so much.  *hugs and kisses*lvoe ya jesse the broken  When I was a young man I vowed never to marry until I found the ideal woman. Well, I found her - but, alas, she was waiting for the perfect man. :( |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EnchantedMelody~ I'm the one passing out bouquets of thanks ! I thank each of you for your uniqueness. Martie~ Too much time on my hands ????  LOL ! But ... I'll settle for 'clever' if you insist ! *Hugs* SmittenKitten~ Indeed you may ! Thank you for such a nice comment. Hang on girl ... we've got a long way to go ! Jesse~ You sweet angel you ! You ARE on the mend ... I can 'feel' it. You ARE special .... VERY ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
OH yes - such wonderful moccasins they are, my friend...  |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
way cool margie! that was a fun little journey..and I'M honoured to have been a little part of the journey!  enjoyed! hugs, g "If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ I thank ya' ! DG~ Thanks to YOU ! I enjoyed this one bunches ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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