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. . . Haiku, too |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
clouds forming darkly lightning strikes while thunder rolls rain falling earthward trees offer branches welcoming life giving rain nourishment embraced leaves spin with the breeze frolicking in aftermath clouds lift and sun shines Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 07-02-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Ah, Haiku lives again this week....I shall have to ply my hand and see if I can come up to the Masters levels of Interloper and Cpat Hair.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
no can do haiku sighing as I read your verse counting syllables  I love the form but can't quite capture that minimalist flair...sigh...guess I type too much! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sighing afterwards earth drank deeply from passing green was born again |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Great job, Interloper. I felt like I was watching it happen before my eyes.  All writing comes |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful haikuing. Bravo! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
and that's just the way it is! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper, Enjoyed the haiku. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wish it'd rain again here  I liked this very much!! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I feel wet oops, can I say that! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lady ~ OK, yore on! serenity ~ Yup, miserly with wurds here Ron ~ GR8 addendum. Add it on and we will publish Lone Wolf ~ What greater praise could I receive? Thank you PM ~ *sigh* {grin} Thanx Martie ~ And if'n ewe say so it's true Sy ~ Enjoyed your visit SEA ~ What with all the writing aboutr rain, I'm gettin' kinda waterlogged Colleen ~ Oooooooops. I doan think sew Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Is this a contest? |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Raindrops on my head Soaking wet to my bare skin Dried by wind and sun That's the weather overhere normally, great haikus Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
BrightStar ~ It became one Titia ~ Such a beautiful response. That's how we dried off in the south Pacific, too Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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