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Open Poetry #14

Lovers

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

0 posted 2001-07-02 10:20 AM

7/2/01

LOVERS

Those ones who are lovers
Can hold the pain in their chests
For creating the light in
The valley of their hearts
They inflame a candle
Whatever the sorrows they have
They spread some pleasures around
They tell their secrets to the other one
Through their eyes
By saying nothing
And
Those who want to create their name in
Love
Do not care about their personalities

~Wasi~

I love to nice poetry.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-02 10:24 AM

Those ones who are lovers
Can hold the pain in their chests
For creating the light in
The valley of their hearts
They inflame a candle

Beautifully said... one of those that make me wish I had written it... a wonderful poem with agreat thought behind it..

Needless to say... I enjoyed a great deal.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2001-07-02 11:41 AM

This is very lovely Waseem, and embodies a great deal of wisdom...

thank you so much for sharing....

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-07-02 11:43 AM

Very profound, Waseem. You can always see a person for what they are by looking in their heart. Lovely.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

helen smith
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

4 posted 2001-07-02 09:02 PM

ahhhh waseem .my chest aches

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