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D'nal
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since 2001-07-02
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0 posted 2001-07-02 08:50 AM


what is this???
i have to ask.
after all this time,
have you forgotten our past??
i wonder if you loved me,
the way that i loved you,
and after all this time,
you know i still do.
so why are you acting like,
oh nevermind..,

do you have some time
to enjoy a glass of wine?
or maybe you and i,
could take a ride.
and just relax,
while whatching the stary sky.

what's this now??,
you look a bit surprised.
you knew i was going to kiss you,
from the way i gazed in your eyes.
it's been such a long time,
since i had one of those.,,
your electrifying kisses,
enough to curl your toes.

now i ask my self
what is this???
falling in love again
from such a simple kiss......



© Copyright 2001 D'nal - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-07-02 09:27 AM


(smiling) Very sweet...and nicely written..
I think if we would at times...just surprise those we are with... by some simple act of showing we care...some simple way to add a bit of excitement to our everyday life, we would find..love ignited time and time again..to fall over and over...

I Enjoyed this a Great deal!


Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2001-07-02 09:29 AM


Welcome to Passions D'nal!  You described this situation very nicely, a wonderful first post ... I hope to read more.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
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3 posted 2001-07-02 09:44 AM


What a nice use of words! it's so true that if we just surprise the ones we love just a little more, there would be such joy in our lives!  welcome to passions!
Cindi

God is our inspiration

SEA
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4 posted 2001-07-02 09:46 AM


Welcome!   This is so sweet.   I enjoyed this very much  
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2001-07-02 09:57 AM


D'Nal:  Welcome!  
...a kiss is but a kiss, is but a kiss... I liked your poem - I hope to read more from you -   Roniece  

Waseem Cheema
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6 posted 2001-07-02 10:09 AM


Very beautifully written showing your heart....Welcome to passion
Sunshine
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7 posted 2001-07-02 11:48 AM


What is this, you ask? Well, this is a Welcome to Passions!  Please check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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8 posted 2001-07-02 11:57 AM


D'Nal~
Welcome to Passions !
Such lovely thoughts ...
You will just love it here ...
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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helen smith
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9 posted 2001-07-02 09:05 PM


sigh.....
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