Open Poetry #14 |
what is this???? |
D'nal New Member
since 2001-07-02
Posts 7 |
what is this??? i have to ask. after all this time, have you forgotten our past?? i wonder if you loved me, the way that i loved you, and after all this time, you know i still do. so why are you acting like, oh nevermind.., do you have some time to enjoy a glass of wine? or maybe you and i, could take a ride. and just relax, while whatching the stary sky. what's this now??, you look a bit surprised. you knew i was going to kiss you, from the way i gazed in your eyes. it's been such a long time, since i had one of those.,, your electrifying kisses, enough to curl your toes. now i ask my self what is this??? falling in love again from such a simple kiss...... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(smiling) Very sweet...and nicely written.. I think if we would at times...just surprise those we are with... by some simple act of showing we care...some simple way to add a bit of excitement to our everyday life, we would find..love ignited time and time again..to fall over and over... I Enjoyed this a Great deal! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions D'nal! You described this situation very nicely, a wonderful first post ... I hope to read more. Best wishes, /Kit |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
What a nice use of words! it's so true that if we just surprise the ones we love just a little more, there would be such joy in our lives! welcome to passions! Cindi God is our inspiration |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome! This is so sweet. I enjoyed this very much |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
D'Nal: Welcome! ...a kiss is but a kiss, is but a kiss... I liked your poem - I hope to read more from you - Roniece |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Very beautifully written showing your heart....Welcome to passion |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What is this, you ask? Well, this is a Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
D'Nal~ Welcome to Passions ! Such lovely thoughts ... You will just love it here ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
sigh..... |
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