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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2001-07-02 08:03 AM



A LOVE LIKE NO OTHER.....

We have never met
We have never kissed
We have never looked into each other's eyes
We have never strolled upon a beach or saw that sunset together
We probably never will
But I know, oh I know that my love for you is real
That each day spent with you would bring me happiness and laughter
That each night in your arms would bring me unexpected joys
Will it just be a forever dream.....
Will it just be a forever dream.....

Written by: Roniece Dawson-Bruce

© Copyright 2001 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-02 08:26 AM


Ah.... will it be a forever dream...

wistfully sad...

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2001-07-02 08:30 AM


Thank you so much for you message...they are just my thoughts for someone who lives so far away from me...    
Roniece

Rick
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3 posted 2001-07-02 08:41 AM


Roniece

Within our dreams is a lover
So perfect, sweet and kind
One we think of daily
But one so hard to find

Really liked the poem Roniece, hope you will find the one you long.

Rick

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2001-07-02 08:55 AM


Thank you Rick - your words are oh so true...
even if he doesn't come to take me away I'll always have my dreams huh!
Thanks for taking the time to respond
   Roniece

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5 posted 2001-07-02 04:57 PM


Dreams have been known to come true. And the beauty of your dream is obvious.
Sandra

Ethan Halo
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6 posted 2001-07-02 05:03 PM


*sigh*

wonderful sentiments and beautifully penned!  

"Many great relationships start or end in a bar.
Some of the best do both in the course of an evening."

Kethry
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7 posted 2001-07-02 06:07 PM


Roniece,
Only in dreams...
Keth

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



Lone Wolf
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8 posted 2001-07-02 06:11 PM


Very tender, yet sad write.  Sometimes, though, the dreams beats the heck out of the reality!  Nice work.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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9 posted 2001-07-02 06:41 PM


and don't let anyone tell you it ain't real~!


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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10 posted 2001-07-02 08:56 PM


Thank you all for your wonderful replies...I very much appreciate your kind words...
~Roniece~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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11 posted 2001-07-02 09:01 PM


Thank you all for your generous comments to my work.....I really appreciate your kind words. ~Roniece~
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