Open Poetry #14 |
A Love Like No Other........ |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
A LOVE LIKE NO OTHER..... We have never met We have never kissed We have never looked into each other's eyes We have never strolled upon a beach or saw that sunset together We probably never will But I know, oh I know that my love for you is real That each day spent with you would bring me happiness and laughter That each night in your arms would bring me unexpected joys Will it just be a forever dream..... Will it just be a forever dream..... Written by: Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ah.... will it be a forever dream... wistfully sad... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thank you so much for you message...they are just my thoughts for someone who lives so far away from me... Roniece |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Roniece Within our dreams is a lover So perfect, sweet and kind One we think of daily But one so hard to find Really liked the poem Roniece, hope you will find the one you long. Rick |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thank you Rick - your words are oh so true... even if he doesn't come to take me away I'll always have my dreams huh! Thanks for taking the time to respond Roniece |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Dreams have been known to come true. And the beauty of your dream is obvious. Sandra |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
*sigh* wonderful sentiments and beautifully penned! "Many great relationships start or end in a bar. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Roniece, Only in dreams... Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very tender, yet sad write. Sometimes, though, the dreams beats the heck out of the reality! Nice work. All writing comes |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
and don't let anyone tell you it ain't real~! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thank you all for your wonderful replies...I very much appreciate your kind words... ~Roniece~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thank you all for your generous comments to my work.....I really appreciate your kind words. ~Roniece~ |
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