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Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

0 posted 2001-07-01 01:19 AM

Loved into Drift Away

Looking for distance and sharp angles
of green
hush my heart falls
across June sky turned
silk heat

There is still evening
when the flame is turned down
and the sky is becoming
with its color released
drowning me with the liquor
of uncorked jasmine

Whisper now love
for I am drowning in night
and each nova is lit
to fill my darkness with you

Quench this eruption
with that rough hand of tender
smooth it to softest drift away

In sleep I still love you

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2001-07-01 01:21 AM

ahhhh nice as always Martie o yuh

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2001-07-01 01:23 AM

Martie-
this is so tender and beautiful..

such a lovely write..

hugs,
~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Logan
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-07-01 03:04 AM

Sigh, Martie, you do have such a wonderful flow of words that captures all..very good read...gentle smile

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-07-01 02:10 PM

*sigh*

this is wonderful Martie. . . we should all sleep this way. . .

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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-07-01 02:54 PM

Martie~

'There is still evening
when the flame is turned down
and the sky is becoming
with its color released
drowning me with the liquor
of uncorked jasmine'

A sister *sighs* at the beauty of your thoughts.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2001-07-01 03:39 PM

There is still evening
when the flame is turned down
and the sky is becoming
with its color released
drowning me with the liquor
of uncorked jasmine

Whisper now love
for I am drowning in night
and each nova is lit
to fill my darkness with you
===============================

All I wanna know is...does he have a brother??? LOL
this is LOVELY dear postess!!!
must be nice to be this inspired

me

We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away,
Like the doors of heaven will swing wide open if we just find the right words to say.
~E. McCain

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2001-07-01 05:44 PM

Martie,
You can't say it better than that. *L*

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

8 posted 2001-07-01 05:45 PM

Martie, this is a soothing write, I just felt it from head to toe.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-07-01 06:03 PM

Very sweet write, Martie. Lovely sentiments.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

10 posted 2001-07-01 07:39 PM

O, so tender and beautiful Martie.
You never cease to amaze me hon

Maree

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

11 posted 2001-07-01 09:08 PM

This is both tender and lovely, my friend. A very nice read.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the human mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

12 posted 2001-07-01 09:20 PM

Ahhh Martie ... equisite phrasing, lovely sentiments ... much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

13 posted 2001-07-02 11:55 AM

Sounds like a 24 hour a day thing

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

14 posted 2001-07-02 11:57 AM

a little fresh air and some sunshine sure take you a long way, don't they....

this is wonderful...

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

15 posted 2001-07-02 04:13 PM

Quench this eruption
with that rough hand of tender
smooth it to softest drift away

beautiful very beautiful Martie.

"Like Sand underneath the snow, I make you mine." Kristin Hersh

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

16 posted 2001-07-02 07:36 PM

Your thoughts are as light as cotton candy clouds, and they do drift into the mind so easily Martie, this was simply lovely.

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

17 posted 2001-07-02 09:08 PM

Martie,

this was so beautiful hon!! as though
it was written on the gentle sigh of
a warm summer breeze. im in love with
this poem...lol...having the case of the
i really wish i had written this poemitis
hehe. just lovely!
take care.
amy

"but i see your true colors,
shining through...
i see your true colors
and that's why i love you"
~phil collins~

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