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| Open Poetry #14 |
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Seduced BY Poetry |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Slick Wet tongued syllables That slide in sensuous Delight over words That from mind to throat Have been lain out For ear and mouth To ecstatically Experience Soft Feather fall Feelings tickle those Private places we hide From public view, Only uncovering them In intimate shared Times How can the Words not move You to yield, when… In your isolated bed Of emotions, You yearn for another’s Touch to ease The longing Deep inside? Speak to me So I can Come to Understand |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow! Loved this Cpat ... such a beautiful flow to your words, and very visual ... much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Thank You Kit... words are such wonderful things when they touch you... and take you inside your own memories or experiences adding another layer of understanding.. Much appreciate your comment! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"Slick wet tongued syllables that slide in sensuous delight over words... Soft feather fall feelings tickle those private places we hide" ======================== Now, this is a keeper, I really love this! You have some excellent, clever phrasing in this that all poets will relate to and say wow! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Thank You!! As for clever? (smiling) I doubt I am accused of that often.. I like to think about the words others have used to describe and explain things..and this is just a bit of a way to say thank you... Thanks!!! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
This would certainly seduce an aficionado of lexis..... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Cpat: Wonderful writing here ......your words have such wisdom to them!  Roniece |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Thank You Deca... Roniece Dawson-Bruce... You are too kind... Thank You... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah, yes.....you do have a way with words! And they can only seduce in the hands of a masterful poet....which you definitely are!! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 07-02-2001).] |
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D'nal New Member
since 2001-07-02
Posts 7 |
very interesting, with a playful use of words, it was wonderful to say the least. i could learn a thing or two from a writer like you. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sunnyone..you are too kind with your praise, but I thank you for it anyway..( grinning) D'nal... I like to think we can all learn from everyone we read... thank you for th every nice words.. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
As long as the motive remains pure... emotions can easily be manipulated and not always for the benefit of the reader... I appreciated the flow of this piece -- by its very structure and phrasing, the whole became as one of its parts in terms of the descriptive nature and thought-arousing premise. Well done, Ron. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
the analogies are superb!!! this rocks and blesses at the same time  BRAVO SUPERB [This message has been edited by VAS (edited 07-02-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and speaking of Secuction? This is a very good example of what you speak of! Perfectly said! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Those wet tongued syllables clouded my eyes somewhat ... but I still felt the words. Used four of my five senses on this one |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Seduction Perfected... |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
What a silken piece you have here.... Indeed, poetry's seduction is irresistible.. Thank you.... ********************* It's only me.......only me |
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