Open Poetry #14 |
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I Don’t Know |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan ![]() |
7/1/01 I DON’T KNOW I don’t know What else the rules of love are People meet and then separate No one ever find the whole world Some find sky and even some don’t the earth Every one is busy in its own I have Love But have no one to share it I don’t know When we will separate Because We all are on the same journey I don’t know When we will change Because Life is like a sight We were talking about this world Which has a habit of forgetting Why you are angry with me I don’t know What else the rules of love are When you made me cry Up to my full heart Then you become a little bit happy I don’t know What else the rules of love are ~Wasi~ I love to nice poetry. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Love has many ways Great poem Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Wasi---If you figure those rules out, please clue me in ok? Enjoyed much! |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wasi, those darn rules are changing all the time, so you have to make them up as you go, and of this you spoke well. I liked it! If I have made you smile today, then I have done my job! ~* Mysteria *~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
It all happens for a reason I believe, although it would be nice to know the rules ahead of time! Very thought provoking write, Waseem. ![]() All writing comes |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
I play to the rules waseem ,,but they keep moving the goal posts .... very nice poetry |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Very nice write, my friend, a question you ask that has been asked all the ages, for they change for each encounter...gentle smile |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
I am very greatful to you all for such nice comments.......I love you |
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