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(Too To Bey Khubbar Hey) You...are unaware
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(Too To Bey Khubbar Hey) You...are unaware |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan 
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This is one of my independent poem ('AZAAD called in URDU' Independent statements not necessary to have rythem) TOO TO BEY KHUBBAR HAY YOU...ARE UNAWARE Aay dilay bey khubbar O my unaware heart Aay sungh dil sanumm O my stone heart lover Tujay kiya maloom You don't know Muhabat kiya hey What the love is Shaam k dultay he Just after declining of evening Raat k phichlay pahar main In the middle of the night Jub tumhari yad aati hey When you recur me To Subz pattoon pay khizan a jati hey Then, autumn became on the trees Baharain rooth jati hain The pleasures become angry Dil ki gulyan veran ho jati hain The streets of heart become desolate Bay moosam hawain chulti hain Breeze blow without season's Uddasiaan chah jati hain Sadness spread all around Too to sahil hey You are...the sea shore Tujay kiya maloom mooj ka durrde You don't know the pain of a wave Thatain martay sumundar main In the surging sea Jub wo gahray zahum khati hey When it have deep wounds Oor jub muhabat ka ghur toot jata hey And when the home of love is being broken To wo kirchi kirchi ho kar Then after broken into small pieces Hawaoon main bikhar jati hey It spreads in the winds Par tumhain kiya maloom But...You know what (don't know anything because) Too to bey khubbar hey You...are the Unaware Sungh dil hey You...are the stone heart ~Wasi~ I love to nice poetry. [This message has been edited by Waseem Cheema (edited 06-30-2001).] |
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PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
Hi! that is too cool! do you have a pronunciation guide?  ...tom |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
This is so neat that I had to read through it twice I love the way it was written and set up. Great job! ~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial) |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
PoemCrazy & Voiceless.....thanx for such nice comments.... |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
on the contrary waseem ..she is well aware ...she knows what she does to you ...she knows the stoney fortress is a facade .It is just like you to feel the pain of a wave in a stormy sea ...I love this one ( when will you make her yours ahhhhhhhhhh ) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
May I call you "Wowseem?" I am quickly becoming a fan of yours. This is so beautiful: "You are...the sea shore Tujay kiya maloom mooj ka durrde You don't know the pain of a wave Thatain martay sumundar main In the surging sea Jub wo gahray zahum khati hey When it have deep wounds Oor jub muhabat ka ghur toot jata hey And when the home of love is being broken To wo kirchi kirchi ho kar Then after broken into small pieces Hawaoon main bikhar jati hey It spreads in the winds Par tumhain kiya maloom But...You know what (don't know anything because) Too to bey khubbar hey You...are the Unaware Sungh dil hey You...are the stone heart" I would love to learn this language if only to be able to write like this...wonderful!!! |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Thank you very much for such nice comments ......... |
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