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brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

0 posted 2001-06-30 04:18 PM

I love you
in ways words fail
to express,
in our silence,
and through every tear
shed by your absence.

You confess
sorrow clouding
your true worth.
In the solitary hour
I shall be
your witness,
captive to
your divine stir,
For I love you
and love you
ever more
whispering
undying poetry.
-------------------------
For Dawn, the Goddess as she is rightly known these
days.

"Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-06-30 04:20 PM

heaven is dawning now
before her he gives his bow
he's in love, somehow

and I enjoyed this all the way!

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-06-30 05:36 PM

the title drew me in! ha ha , just teasing, I was a bit surprised to read such emotion coming from you, Brian, you've been holding out on us! I love it!

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2001-06-30 09:35 PM

Aha, another love poem! I remember when you said you did not do love poems..
This is great.
Sandra

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

4 posted 2001-06-30 11:04 PM

Well you know how to warm a girl's heart!

I enjoyed the read

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2001-06-30 11:15 PM

Beautiful, brian---and such a Goddess deserves this sweet worship!!! Hugs to you, hoping too that your time apart will be short and time together sweeter than the sweetest dream.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-07-01 05:02 AM

Simply fabulour Brian...James

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2001-07-01 04:05 PM

You confess
sorrow clouding
your true worth.
In the solitary hour
I shall be
your witness,
captive to
your divine stir,
For I love you
and love you
ever more
whispering
undying poetry.
=======================
your Goddess inspires beautiful things in you Bri-gator...

this is sincere and lovely...why I bet you'll be writing of petals again soon

very sweet Brian...I like this side of your poetry

me

We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away,
Like the doors of heaven will swing wide open if we just find the right words to say.
~E. McCain

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

8 posted 2001-07-01 05:22 PM

Brian, what can I say... this is simply beautiful.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-07-01 06:49 PM

well Brian. . . it looks like you're one of us now. . . *insert evil laugh here*

this is excellent, you've really shown the emotion well here my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

10 posted 2001-07-01 06:51 PM

It's good to see this side of you once more, I'm very happy for you, Bri

This is a lovely testament~

Take care,
Melissa~

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

11 posted 2001-07-01 09:08 PM

Now, what a lucky girl! Lovely Brian.

Severn
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

12 posted 2001-07-01 09:53 PM

Wow.

Bring on the emotional poetry all right...

K

I am a refugee of logic...insisting
on unlikely land with every step.

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

13 posted 2001-07-01 10:11 PM

Beautiful sentiments and wonderful phrasing Brian ... a lovely piece indeed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

14 posted 2001-07-01 10:35 PM

brian--I love this love in you!

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

15 posted 2001-07-01 11:42 PM

Brian I love this mushy love stuff....encore...encore...More love stuff please.

Bridgette

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

16 posted 2001-07-02 04:34 PM

karilea,
thank you for taking the time
to read my poem and reply in rhyme.

Kathleen, sorry for getting your hopes up but someone else already has my heart and they had to work hard to get it. Thanks

Sandra, I said that? Shame on me. Thanks for your reply.

SmittenKitten, I am just returning the favour. Thanks.

Seren. Thank you for your very kind comments. I am hoping that too.

James, thank you for those very kind words.

Jan, petals? oh god I might be, but I don't want to get too clichéd. Thanks.

Munda, I am speechless, thanks.

Sven, "shock" you mean I am romantic poet now? I have always worn my heart on my sleeve even if it was gift wrapped on metaphor. Well I am proud to be part of the gang. Thanks.

Melissa, thanks for your warm words. I hope to show of this side of me, if my muse agrees.

Mysteria, thanks, I am lucky that I found someone who will put up with me.

K, I am taking baby steps soon I will be running with my emotions lol. thanks.

Kit, thank you.

Martie, thanks

Bridgette, Oh don't worry there is more on the way, I am hopeless in love and there is no stopping me. Thanks for your kind reply.

"Like Sand underneath the snow, I make you mine." Kristin Hersh

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