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Not For Me
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Not For Me |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Not for me, the lovers' kiss tender touch, so sweet sublime. Not for me, my one real bliss arms wide open, all the time. Not for me, the opened door roses fragrance filling rooms. Not for me, as those before loving flowers will not bloom. Nevermore will heartbeats skip as your eyes look into mine. Nevermore your wine soaked lips grapes will wither on the vine. Not for me, not anymore since the day you slammed the door. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...the wine soured....a sad, but expressive, write.... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sad and heavy hearted poem but the point delivered very emphatically...good work! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very powerful emotions conveyed in this piece. Well done. Keep writing, you will heal in time. Trust me. All writing comes |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
dude...I know the feeling all too well...at one point you need to ask yourself: should you continue on and be hurt everyday...or should you cut your losses and start to heal...the latter is harder to buy into...but ultimately it is the best...Rod  Love one another-let God do the worrying, |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, So brilliantly and sadly portrayed. As the saying goes, no matter how trite it may be, "When one door closes, another one opens". I guess we have to just keep believing... Love, Elise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
well expressed and nicely written. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, my lil sis... There will be another sweet love for you, I just know...if you will but let it happen. I know the pain is intense, and words will not salve the wound, but you can believe that those of us who love you are there to help you through...believe that...it's true... The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautifully written, but very sad to read. You write your emotion well. Michael |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Catalina, your poem tuggs at my heart... Thank you for this touching read... *~coco~* |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I could hear the echo of that slammed door as it faded into silence... but you know what? Anyone who slams the door to you should probably stay the hell out! Keep your eyes on the road ahead of you -- not on the rear view mirror. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Coco, thanks for bringing this back..I'm not so sad anymore. Mark, I agree with you, and have changed my thoughts a bit since I wrote this. Sandra |
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