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Open Poetry #14

A friend in feed

The meek
Junior Member

since 2001-06-22

Posts 16
Australia

0 posted 2001-06-30 08:43 AM

A meeting again,
With our old fat friend,
We don’t mix well,
With the other chemicals,

So pour us away?
That’s what you want,
Not today, my fat friend,
Erinye is not happy,

Change the diamond,
People have tried,
You are not the contents,
Of your sandwich,

Food, that’s all we are,
To you, fat friend,
The picture is good,
Of an egg, of course,

The wheels want to come,
But they never talk,
They only turn,
In the same dull direction,

The yolk on the wall,
My focus point now,
The ivory table,
Let’s start the music,

You are a misguided torpedo,
At the bottom of the hierarchy,
Your emancificated mind,
Headed straight for the rocks.

We must read the lines before we read between the lines.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-06-30 08:45 AM

I think I understand this...but I've read it three times...and I only think I understand....

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

2 posted 2001-07-01 06:55 AM

I'm with Sunshine, but then, she's so much smarter than me, keeps me puzzled

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

3 posted 2001-07-01 07:21 AM

I agree with the last two replies, would like to understand but do not.

Maybe give us all a clue.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-07-02 10:56 AM

Your emancificated mind,
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Help us understand ...

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