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Understanding Love
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Understanding Love |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Eclipsed, The sun’s face Still burns through Delicate bare eyes Not designed To look on Such brilliance Shaded Eyes still flinch When touched By brightness Not meant to Be understood Through simple Visions Clouded Understanding, With only The form or theory And not the soul Seen |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
face up sun's rays glow eyes closed red veins angry seen clearly |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Cpat Hair, "Eclipsed, The sun’s face Still burns through Delicate bare eyes Not designed To look on Such brilliance..." Wow... your writing and wording is sooo beautiful! Just wonderful  TaraB |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Feeling very much the rookie in the presence of a couple of major leaguers. Bob |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Cpat, This is soft and wonderful If we could only think with our souls and not with pride..... Thanks Connie |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Cpat- wow...i really like this alot! very beautiful write... ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
I Like this Wonderful write here, but i still don't understand Love...... A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 06-22-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
eclipsed or shaded clouded understanding is a veil to the soul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair, That's a good pair of sun glasses you have. Enjoyed |
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DYME Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 104Texas |
Deep and and graceful. NO WEAPON FORMED AGAINST ME SHALL PROSPER... ISAIAH 54:17 |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This was indeed very graceful |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Delicate words, a lovely write!!! Nathan |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A very lovely write Cpat ... you've woven these delicate thoughts beautifully, much enjoyed. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
As one looks upon sunshine.....Wonderful read!!! Bridgette |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
yes, that's about how easy love is to understand...beautiful flow of the mind and word |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Cpat: This is lovley.....such a nice read!  Roniece |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Wow!! Many thanks to everyone for commenting... I worried this was too obscure in ways...so it is nice to see so many of you enjoyed! Thanks!!!! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Not so obscure that those who appreciate fine poetry wouldn't take the time to read, feel, and find understanding throughout... |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Very nicely written ... it's the first of yours I've read ... went on and read more, but came back to this one because of the truely wonderful amount of vision you've portrayed in a few simple verses Very nice |
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