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From Him To Her Memory
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From Him To Her Memory |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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From Him to Her Memory I shall wind up the sale then sail the wind before mould hits the hare let the breeze mold your hair into sunblown laughter skirting your cheeks allow your cheeks to skirt your dimples then as you bend into the wind and wind me ‘round your bend as your laughter greets the sun and the son waves you on as waves break the shore as yes, I’ll remember you there, my lovely evermore |
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MissNTrope Junior Member
since 1999-07-29
Posts 43 |
Hmmm... I like this lots - but that's not surprising...  Cuz I LOOOVE those punny word plays... and pseudonyms.... AAARRRGGGHHH...   |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Then it looks like it's just me and you, Missy...I'm glad someone else thinks like me...[laughing]...argh! |
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autumn Junior Member
since 2001-06-08
Posts 44Maine |
Loved the play with words. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you autumn...I have a feeling there will be more... |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh but you are a clever one! This loved me! ~* If I have made you smile today, then I have done my job! *~ ~Mysteria~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
aren't you the clever one today!!  I find this to be quite a find! I treasure treasures like this! Well done!  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is so clever! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I like this one! All writing comes |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Hmmm... such an interesting play with words and their meanings. Wound into a thread...then woven into a cloth.. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Karilea~ Aren't you just a ray of this is such an exuberant, clever lil' poem, of course, I love it~Take care, Melissa~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sunshine: oooh I like, I like!! Roniece |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Yanno, Karilea - This poem reminds me of the time I tried to transport a cat in my car. The poor critter meowed and went psycho, his hair sticking out in all directions at once. Naturally, I wanted the kitty to be comfortable, so I gently picked him up by the scruff of his neck, and, at 60 mph, held him out in the whistling wind as the semis blew past. *sighhh* I miss those road trips. (Just kidding, so please don't tell Pandora that recidivism has struck me low - OK?) |
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