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Welcome, Morn
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Welcome, Morn |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Welcome, Morn saluting you even before wild exclaim of birds, when caliginous is yet borne, warm fluid air stock still and only I am moving it moments having passed now, thoughts of reading you still trickling my spine in anticipation of what will be quiet nitches of time breathing hope Café du Monde memories now holding crèmed brew, a sole coffee mate ticking off thoughts birds and dog making good company chimes waiting for Kansa spirits to blow Welcome, Morn |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nice wake up call! I love the mood! You're up before yourself ...'Sunshine' Please help me with the longest word in this line...... "when caliginous is yet borne," I thirst for knowledge! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good morning Ethome! "Caliginous" = "dark". See the light? Laughing with you.... thank you for reading this! Hope it left you in the proper mood for the rest of the day.... |
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Lisa Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 88Lunenburg,VT USA |
I liked the way it all flowed, through me and around me. What a lovely way to start the day. Thank you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lisa, thank you! It's a most difficult prospect, trying to convey feelings...but after all, that IS our goal...and I'm glad you felt this along with me! Thank you! |
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