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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533
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As rain is drawn to ocean and sinners to their knees, am I with great emotion o'erwhelmed with Love for thee. As wind is necessary to fling the flower seed, so too must I now carry the song of my hearts need. As the swallows of Capistrano inbreed that place as home, as sun turns storm to rainbow, to thee I pen this poem. As porpoise freely glide the sea and birds take to the air, the young in spring define esprit and generals must dare. As royalty to family tree, anonymity legionnaire, so too must I now cleave to thee in passion so declare. In patience I've not known before I yet will fan the fire, for you the one that I adore and to my core desire. Hope hinges on tomorrow, as light defines the day, I'd be wither'd in sorrow should you throw this Love away. Know thee most never know the bliss of the passion I am of, pray thou the strength not to miss the promise of this Love. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Straight out of required reading in English literature class! Very eloquently emoted and penned. Good work. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
eloquentindeed!! Nicely written and nicely said.. enjoyable!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In patience I've not known before I yet will fan the fire, for you the one that I adore and to my core desire. Hope hinges on tomorrow, as light defines the day, I'd be wither'd in sorrow should you throw this Love away. Know thee most never know the bliss of the passion I am of, pray thou the strength not to miss the promise of this Love. ============================ oh yes..this is lovely...romantic and enchanting.... and very well written...outstanding employ of vocab, imagery, poetic phrasing, classic language and verbiage and masterfully tied up in rhyme divine...very well done poet sir very cool write of devotion here. jm We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*swooning* this is just soooooooo romantic....  |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Mr. Sheldon; Thank you for the very high compliment. Cpat Hair: You are generous in your encoragement, thanks. Janet Marie; Merci beaucoup pour la bon mots. SEA; I pray someone is there to catch you. Thank you. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is wonderful. I think you have taken the spot of PiP's Prince of Romance!  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautifully written, Richard! All writing comes |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
What an exquisite piece of writing this was, so filled with romance and longing....just beautiful. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is an excellent piece of writing.... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Richard, I do believe this is the nicest piece of writing I have ever read of yours, this is a keeper for sure (into the poetry festival with this one my friend!) Loved it, loved it! "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Poet Devine; Such mush ignites my blush. Thank you. Lone Wolf; I enjoy your enjoyment. Thank you. Suetang; The fact that someone read and enjoyed from across the globe is exciting. Thank you. Balladeer; For my modest submission to gain your attention and encouragement is high praise. (notice I changed my icon?) Mysteria: I will thank you again my friend for leading me to Passions in Poetry. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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