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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert 
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Vacant eyes forever staring Is this what comes of no one caring Scarred wrists and arms from one so young How many songs are now unsung No tribute here as she lays so cold No memories shared no story told No heroes come to make the save As Jane Doe is taken to a Potters Grave. Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Such an unneccesary loss...well written. |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Sounded like something I would write... Thank you for putting into words what I couldn't find. I have unfortunetly had to experience this. What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
This reminds me how ripe our world is for Compassion. A little Respect and attention can go a long way for a person. A thought-provoking poem... thank you. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
The saddness of more than one life shattered with the loss of one..sad, and terribly too true too many times...gentle smile |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AZBlond~ Such a sad refrain ... tenderly treated. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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