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azblond
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The Steamy Desert

0 posted 2001-06-30 12:10 PM




Vacant eyes forever staring
Is this what comes of no one caring
Scarred wrists and arms from one so young
How many songs are now unsung

No tribute here as she lays so cold
No memories shared no story told
No heroes come to make the save
As Jane Doe is taken to a Potters Grave.

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

© Copyright 2001 MiChelle Van Vleet - All Rights Reserved
JLR
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since 2001-02-04
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1 posted 2001-06-30 12:48 PM


Such an unneccesary loss...well written.
Jessica
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2 posted 2001-06-30 01:38 AM


Sounded like something I would write... Thank you for putting into words what I couldn't find. I have unfortunetly had to experience this.

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...
3 posted 2001-06-30 06:35 PM


This reminds me how ripe our world is for Compassion.  A little Respect and attention can go a long way for a person.  A thought-provoking poem...  thank you.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

Logan
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4 posted 2001-06-30 06:50 PM


The saddness of more than one life shattered with the loss of one..sad, and terribly too true too many times...gentle smile
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-06-30 10:41 PM


AZBlond~
Such a sad refrain ...
tenderly treated.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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