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Scent With Love
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Scent With Love |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Scent With Love ~ ~*Marge Tindal*~  Oft' upon a scented sigh ~ ~ Your memory seems so near Fragrance of a time-ago ~ ~ A time when you were here Chiffonier of lace and linen ~ ~ Monogrammed embroidery Rose Water scent still clinging ~ ~ Ever so delicately Inhale I do ~ ~ Sweet memories of you O' Mother of my heart ~ ~ It's as though you surely knew Learning to live without you ~ ~ Would be the very hardest thing I'd ever have to do ~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 my mom wears Here's My Heart.....it will forever remind me of her.....loved this  hugs... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh, Marge- what a sweet remember for you mother.. i could smell the soft fragrance as i read the loving words.. hugging you tightly, my friend, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge I have breathed in the scent when she was near me You have tugged at my heartstrings I wish she were here to comfort me Lots of love went into this piece Liz |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
MARGE..... HOW THIS REMINDS ME OF YOUR GREAT POEM "SPIRIT WALKING" no more will she walk across my night or day.... BLESS YOU FOR THIS REMINDER OF LOST LOVE.. WARRIOR |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Darn it, I had all kinds of comments ready with "smelly" and "stinky" and all that stuff and you turn around and write a heart-touching piece like this...you can't be trusted!!! (except to write beautiful poetry)  |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
A mother is the best friend you will ever have on this lifeplane...gentle smile |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You and I have shared enough in memories that you know exactly where in my heart this resides.... [of course I saw the "come-back" at 'Deer first..., so this is, of course...Oh So Much Better!....] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely!!!! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Treasure all your sweet memories of your mother. Not all of us have those! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Echo Trillium's comment - treasure them no matter how trite or small, for some of us have none at all (hey, that rhymed...where is Balladeer when I need him?) This was beautiful Marge, delicate and graceful! "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Thank you, sweetie. Just going through some wonderfully scented memories today. Vicky~ Needed that hug, love. She is so delicately scented in my memories. Elizabeth, my friend~ I know just how you feel, honey. No better comfort than the arms of our mothers. SoaringEagle~ My sweet ~Warrior~, I hold yours in my heart too, love. I love you. Balladeer~ I love catching you in surprise. Thank you, sweetheart. Logan~ That is the plain truth, my friend. No champion larger than a mother's heart. Karilea~ Yes ... and it pleases me to know we share. PoetdeVine~ Thanks for thinking so. BettyLou~ On each sweet scented reminder, I do, my friend. Mysteria~ You are a sweet friend. Balladeer - a loveable rascal. Love you both. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful memory of your Mom....so well written with love! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Thank you for enjoying this scent. I enjoyed the thoughts brought to me on the fragrance of the rose. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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