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Open Poetry #14

Rainbow

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-06-30 12:05 PM

Rainbow

If I were the sky
o'er oceans, dales, and deserts
and mountains most high
every morn from a cloud
in crescive colours to pour
a rainbow would greet you
on the stair outside your door

To shine on you there, not to make you suppose...
but because you are true gold--a golden rose.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-06-30 12:53 PM

A rainbow would greet you...what an incredible greeting that would be!

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

2 posted 2001-06-30 01:32 AM

I loved your imagary... Nicely done...

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2001-06-30 06:28 AM

Well that's a greeting that would inspire the heart of any human....I commend you for coming up with the beauty of the idea!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-06-30 07:50 AM

What a unique and colorful gift! Thank you!

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-06-30 09:51 AM

What lovely thoughts. A fitting gift indeed.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

6 posted 2001-06-30 06:45 PM

Thank you all for reading and enjoying this.

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