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Lisa
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0 posted 2001-06-29 11:59 AM





They say that I should write
At least a little every day.
But sometimes I just don’t have,
Much I want to say.

But I try to write,
Even a line or two,
Sometimes just a thought,
Or maybe even a few.

Sometimes it comes out funny.
Sometimes it comes out sad.
Occasionally it’s even really good,
And at others it’s really bad.

So here I sit
And write these words.
And I can’t help but wonder,
Will they ever be heard?
                       Lisa ‘98

© Copyright 2001 Lisa M. Fisher - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-29 12:02 PM


we all wonder if our words are heard and the meanings behind them understood or if they in some way helped another... from my own experience..of reading. I can tell you many peoples words have been heard..and I am sure your too...


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with you
2 posted 2001-06-29 12:04 PM


I wonder if the feelings I feel can be felt by those reading my words, and if they know, or can realize, that in my poetry, I put my heart open for them to read......  

* I liked this very much  

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VAS
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3 posted 2001-06-29 12:11 PM


it must be the writer's plight
to wonder all through the night
if what we say can reach and ear
if what we say can quell a fear

if what we say has any need
to be said or to be read
let alone to keep us fed

oh, I'm sorry, dear, oh dear
I've gone ridiculous from sublime I fear
I hope you don't shed any a tear
for the pain this poes may have led to dear.

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4 posted 2001-06-29 12:13 PM


Lisa...stay around and read awhile
then take with you some welcome smiles
for you'll come back to sit and rhyme
and we shall welcome you each time...

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5 posted 2001-06-29 01:05 PM


they are. . . always. . . and in ways that you never thought possible. . .



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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Lisa
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6 posted 2001-06-29 01:15 PM


Thnk you all. Everyone has such a nice way of saying things. A gift with words. Thank you for sharing your gifts with me.
illusion
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7 posted 2001-06-29 03:17 PM


Keep writing.   I enjoyed reading.  
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Member Rara Avis
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8 posted 2001-06-30 02:06 PM


Yes, you do ... and keep on keepin' on
Irish Rose
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9 posted 2001-06-30 05:39 PM


You have found the perfect place to be heard, we have it all here, love, tears, joy and sadness, keep on writing.


RSWells
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10 posted 2001-06-30 08:58 PM


Write first for you. Write true. Write right away the blues.

"Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve"

Titia Geertman
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11 posted 2001-06-30 09:24 PM


You just write on Lisa, you did a great job here.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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