Open Poetry #14 |
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I Wear You |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869![]() |
I wear you like a cherished locket between the cleavage of my breasts close to the beating of my heart I wander nakedly, without you bathing in fragrant memories drowning in magnolia bouquet no longer my ray of sunshine I am but a porcelain china doll cascading rivulets of candlelight and yellow roses in ginger hair as fiery moonlight drapes a sarong over the shoulder of a memory a trellis weaving forget- me- nots echoes lovingly, our torch song Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This poem is so romantically classy! A very enjoyable read! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahhh, geez, Victoria, I love the way you write these...gentle smile |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Love this romantic piece. Charisma |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ This is so gracefully elegant~ Has a soft Victorian flavor to it ... know what I mean ? I like ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Jessica![]()
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Victoria... I liked this poem very much. It left me speechless.... See, I am still struggling for words... ![]() What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very romantic, haven't read anything quite like this...haven't ever wrote anything quite like this, very unique |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very sweet...James |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
ethome..thank you very much..always nice to hear from you ethome ![]() logan..thank you for you kind comments. ![]() Charisma..thank you for peeking in.. hugss marge..thank you marge..only graceful in my writing haa.. jessica..just close your eyes and write what you see. Sometimes its a little misty but than starts to develop sometimes instantly. ![]() passing shadows..thank you, i made quite a few changes before i was satified with it..i do alot of editing before i am finished.. ![]() james..Just like you ![]() Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I enjoyed this for its imagery and soft romantic tone... I could see an overdose of your words might indded turn even the hardnosed into a romantic sort... keep writing them!!! |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So beautiful, your words of romance. these lines were most powerful to me: "as fiery moonlight drapes a sarong over the shoulder of a memory a trellis weaving forget- me- nots echoes lovingly, our torch song" Perfect. Thanks for more romance in this unromantic life I live. Sandra |
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