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Can You Whisper Softly To Me?
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Can You Whisper Softly To Me? |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~*~ Can You Whisper Softly? ~*~Can you whisper softly to me as the winds go blowing by? Can you gently caress me as these tears fall from my eyes? ~*~ Calmly, can you say to me the words I long to hear? Words filled with hope and love, so tenderly, I will hold them dear. ~*~ I dreamt of you again last night, I watched you smiling in your sleep; I wished you were there when I awakened, to hold your heart in my sacred keep. ~*~ I would surly walk in your gentle shadow, and watch you filled with joy and pride, For I so long to walk right beside you, and to never leave your side. ~*~ I need to hold your heart next to mine, hold it close and never let go. I need to feel your arms all around me. Lovingly, you kiss me from head to toe. ~*~ Once again we walk my path of dreams, I take a journey into the unknown. Two fantasy lovers under the moonlight, This dream is all mine to own. ~*~ I will continue this journey for a lifetime, there is so much more about you to find. Each night I share love with a dream mate. Such perfection, only in dreams can you hope to find. ~ * ~ For the man of my dreams! ~ * ~ art: Josephine Wall music: Twilight ~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 06-24-2001).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOY  |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I just love, love poems. Beautiful indeed. Eventhough perfection does not exist when you love sometimes you are blind to imperfections(that's the beauty or tragedy of being in love). Thanks again. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
yes, mysteria, i am whispering....i'm here  |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mysteria, Ohh how softly romantic this is!!! I just loooove it! Love it love it love it TaraB |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sharon, as you already know love/soulmate poems are one of my favourite things  as always, you penned this so beautifully~Take care, Melissa~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Here's hoping your dreams come true. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
How utterly lovely! "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Can you whisper softly to me? Can you come true.........? My dream would never be complete without you....... Thank you for such a soft read.... ********************************* It's only me.......only me |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I hope he hears and replies in kind. Lovely! All writing comes |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
This completely filled my heart with butterflies...so very beautiful, Sharon. I am not sure who this was written for, but whoever it was has been a wonderful source of inspiration bringing these mesmerizing words from your heart that we have been blessed to share in. SO VERY LOVELY! Hugs and smiles to you, and much love, always, dawn |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Martha: You make me laugh...why does it have to be for anyone in particular, this is the man of my dreams! Just a poem, just a poem! Thank you sweet one for even thinking there could be someone I would be writing it to |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Vandana: Thank you. Walker: You keep loving love poems, for without love in your life you have nothing! Thank you for reading this one. And another thing, psst...don't tell anyone, but perfect doesn't exist trust me! Balladeer: You showed up for this one? Must be at least a "C" then, and you can whisper in my ear any time  rosepetals25: I am so glad it brought out the romantic in ya! Thanks Melissa: I decided to show ya my romantic side! Glad you liked what you saw! Richard: He, he, that would be wonderful!  Irish Rose: Thank you. My Enchanted Melody: With a name like yours, I couldn't loose on this one - knew you might like it! May lots of love come your way! Lone Wolf: How sweet! There is no "he" this is just a "simple love poem", the car may not be running, but it still has wheels Thank you though - gentle smile! |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...spoken much to beautifully for only a dream...this dream must come true!!! I love this! Definitely a KEEPER!!!... "...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Fancy: Thank you, but "been there, done that", but you never know, there may be a next time, and never say never right?. (were there enough cliches in that - ?)"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Incredibly beautiful and tender... the music and picture and words leave me sighing with delight. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mysteria, There are many of voices in the wind. But you have one that you tune in. Enjoyed |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
May the sweet dreams continue ... even after he has found you. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mysteria--a beautiful dream! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Well done m'dear.... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am so sorry I have taken so long to thank you all for being so kind as to read my work, (grandchildren are time consuming), but I do appreciate and am so glad you liked it. "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
how tender and written with a lot of love. superb. Charisma |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Charisma: Thank you for reading and enjoying this one, ah but isn't love the greatest? "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
I loved it... It couldn't be better Mysteria... Thank you for writting such a beautiful work of art... What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You write such beautiful soothing poetry. I always warms the heart of the reader.....well done and I wish you the best of luck as you continue! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Jessica and Ethome ~*~ Thank you both for kind words, for it helps to know someone not only reads but enjoys what I write. "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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