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Intimate Acquaintance
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Intimate Acquaintance |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 it goes beyond what I haven’t said, passes through my yearning, and right into the way I want you to know me... the spoken word isn’t too instrumental in the direction of this channel‘s surge... such formalities are gaining on the warmth collected, threatening to freeze over the outlet of the only untainted means of expression... it overwrites any lines I may have used, ascends to the nearest cloud, and directly above my resigned-to-acceptance face... the defense of jaded resistance is but ocean-drenched sand in the design of your awareness... an attempt to slither past would prove futile, further verifying the uselessness of my denial of the eyes that see me transparently... it reaches me more alluringly than cobalt bliss, steals me away to ivory’s drift, and sets down the unexpected predicted... the unappeasable sun has no place in the mystic rouse of this freedom... obligations to maintaining the flame are pointless, since the certainty of my future is complete on the imminent horizon that preserves my sanctuary... -kh 06/27-28/01 it was love that first drew me, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
such nice imagery and language... and the thoughts..well they just float on the readers mind... great work here!!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
it goes beyond what I haven’t said, passes through my yearning, and right into the way I want you to know me... the spoken word isn’t too instrumental in the direction of this channel‘s surge... such formalities are gaining on the warmth collected, threatening to freeze over the outlet of the only untainted means of expression... ========================= it reaches me more alluringly than cobalt bliss, steals me away to ivory’s drift, and sets down the unexpected predicted... the unappeasable sun has no place in the mystic rouse of this freedom... obligations to maintaining the flame are pointless, since the certainty of my future is complete on the imminent horizon that preserves my sanctuary... ============================== must be one hell of a view...that imminent horizon... someday you'll have to give me directions... I used to know...but I seem to have lost the map....or perhaps taken a wrong turn.. moths are so good at that..... ignore my blah blah blah... this is an awesome poem K,...one of your best...the promise and hope in the first verse...the imagery in that last verse... and the intend of the poem. very cool write poetess marigold jm We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, |
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esclandre Member
since 2001-06-11
Posts 62Northern California |
"and directly above my resigned-to-acceptance face... the defense of jaded resistance is but ocean-drenched sand in the design of your awareness..." I really liked that part. I love the verbal imagery, foundered in emotional angst. Cool. Esclandre |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
OHH, sp, you outdid yourself here, or broke out like the butterfly and are soaring...gentle smile |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It certainly does do all those things and you have penned them so beautifully! |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Very well written!  I enjoyed your use of words... You really made every word flow together. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I want one of those. *G* This is great, snowpants... love the imagery. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Snowpants, this is incredible! loved every line of it! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kris- This is stunning hon!! I am sorry I have been so slack with my replies as of late, but gosh am I glad I didn't miss this beauty! This is my favorite of yours thus far, the imagery just beautiful, and the depth of your writing leaves me simply awestruck!! take care. i'll be in touch w/ you soon. love ya girlie amy "but i see your true colors, |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You've touched me once again with this, thank you so much! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Cpat hair: thank you...I am glad you could enjoy this! JM: hey...directions? I couldn't tell you if I tried!!  but, it is one fantastic view, I'll tell you that much...but, thanks, J, for the compliments and all that...glad you liked...  escalandre: thanks for the reply...I appreciate your taking the time to read and give your thoughts! Logan: well, thank you, my friend...I am happy you enjoyed this! ethome: yes, indeed! thank you for the kind reply! Jessica: thank you so much...you are very kind...I'm glad you liked it! suthern: it is a great thing...thank you, my friend...happy you could stop by! Tiersdin: thanks so much for your enthusiastic reply! I'm glad you enjoyed this!  Aims: no need to apologize!  I'm just glad you liked this! thanks so much, girlie! -e ~~~~~Kathleen: I am happy to know that you could get something out of this! thanks for the kind reply! sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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