Open Poetry #14 |
Etched in Time... |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
“Etched In Time” Our love is etched in time Like the etching of sand on this beautiful shore I watch as the waves come crashing against the coastline The Surf in all Her thunderous “roar”-- I gaze out at that crystal water Thoughts of you washing over my mind Yes our love is forever Etched into the hands of time— You’ve become a part of my soul As I’ve become a part of your heart No matter what happens Our bond will not end, even if we do part— Some things are meant to be Like the ocean so deep and blue Some things are forever Like the love I feel for you— I look out at the horizon Of soft blue sky meeting deep blue of sea As I wonder for the millionth time How did I get so lucky? Why did you choose me? Our journey together has been tremendous Your love lifts me up time and time again I feel in my heart that what we share is magical Loving you does not feel like a sin— Yet I know you’re with another As I patiently wait here for you We’ll know when the time is right For now I’ll just watch this spectacular view— When many years have passed And both you and I have gone Lovers everywhere will still be able to hear The beauty of our song The tide and ocean serve to remind me As I’ve completed this verse and rhyme That our love darling Is forever etched in time AMK June 30, 2001 [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 06-30-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is very nice, Amy... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh my, I have sat on the rocks by the ocean and thought these words myself. Very beautiful, and I hope you have your timeless love. That is how it should be. Sandra |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I could almost hear the waves crashing to shore |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Amy, Congratulations.....i wish you the best. As Always, Laura |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Can Honesty ever really be "wrong"? The ocean of love is a powerful and beautiful force -- just make sure your footing is solid and keep your eyes open for the undertoe... Respect the ocean and it'll respect you in return. You've written words with which I can relate all too clearly. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and carved in forever. . . you know that I love this one Amy. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Beautiful heart sincere poem of promise and devotion Amy... lovely imagery as well. I got your email...I'll be in touch when time allows..promise. take care jm We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is so beautiful, Amy! You know how much I love soulmate/romantic poetry Thank you for sharing this with us~ In fact, you have inspired so much that I may just write a poem myself~ Take care keep in touch, Melissa~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 07-01-2001).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Wonderful poem my friend ( I won't tell them that the ocean around there is really more green than blue...lol) oops-- I did... There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Aimee, this is a beautiful dedication of love. Well written about the feelings love can bring. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Thank you ALL for your sweet & generous replies. As always, they are greatly appreciated. take care. amy p.s...jamie, u gave it away lol oh well...its blue AND green hehe... "but i see your true colors, |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Darling girl, this is utterly utterly excellent. Wonderful flow, beautiful imagery, I love this. love as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Hey, girlie...beautiful write, as always...hmmm, bitten, are we? you know I loved this!! -e ~~~~~~~ it was love that first drew me, |
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