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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-07-02 03:48 PM



Cellophane sentences
Wrapped around
Leftover feelings
Crackles with
Static cling
Transparency
Revealed
leaves no
doubt


© Copyright 2001 Cpat Hair - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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1 posted 2001-07-02 03:58 PM


Oh, this is a good one!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Nan
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2 posted 2001-07-02 03:59 PM


Seems pretty clear to me..!

Decaflame
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3 posted 2001-07-02 04:02 PM


what to throw

not outdated

but a taint

bit of bent lid

trust?

shake

it blurps

sounds ok

if you can

trust

sounds




Enjoying your words immensely....

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2001-07-02 04:06 PM


I HATE WHEN THAT HAPPENS.

Seriously, it's so disappointing. Admiring your work here, CH.  

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2001-07-02 04:45 PM


This is great. I did a poem along the same lines, last year. Leftovers hurt sometimes.
Sandra

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6 posted 2001-07-02 04:49 PM


Well expressed.  Nicely done.
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2001-07-02 05:05 PM


Neither does your gigantic talent my friend.
Martie
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8 posted 2001-07-02 05:40 PM


Cpat--I enjoyed this look through your words.
Dark Angel
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9 posted 2001-07-02 05:53 PM


Oh I am liking this!

Maree  

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