Open Poetry #14 |
Leftover Words ( Lies Of Leaving) |
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Cellophane sentences Wrapped around Leftover feelings Crackles with Static cling Transparency Revealed leaves no doubt |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh, this is a good one! All writing comes |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Seems pretty clear to me..! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
what to throw not outdated but a taint bit of bent lid trust? shake it blurps sounds ok if you can trust sounds Enjoying your words immensely.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I HATE WHEN THAT HAPPENS. Seriously, it's so disappointing. Admiring your work here, CH. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is great. I did a poem along the same lines, last year. Leftovers hurt sometimes. Sandra |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Well expressed. Nicely done. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Neither does your gigantic talent my friend. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cpat--I enjoyed this look through your words. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh I am liking this! Maree |
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