My Muse and I converse . . . Find the clue . . .

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Open Poetry #14

My Muse and I converse . . . Find the clue . . .

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-06-28 11:50 AM

You and I
        (now as one)
Miles of traveling
        (we have just begun)
On separate paths
        (as we find our light)
To a common destination
        (shadows shall not hamper us)
Yet unknown.
        (nor instill fear)
Should we converge
        [yes, let us find]
Following our paths
        [a like in our minds]
Of mutual
        [similar - we]
Journey?
         [beckon]
And if the converge
        [so we might find then]
Merge,
        [us]
Would delight
        [in love's light]
Follow?
        [thus]

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-06-28 11:54 AM

Well shoot, I'm clueless....you've made many wonderful friends and any one of them could be amusing you...

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2001-06-28 12:09 PM

Well. I can see this clearly through misty eyes! Very good write! Take a cruise with your muse you'll never regret it!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-06-28 12:18 PM

fascinating

is the clue that each of your acts has been to follow the call of your muse instead of thinking they were all your own thought out choices?

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-06-28 12:27 PM

*pouting* have no idea

but this is wonderful

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-06-28 12:33 PM

I just love riddles and puzzles... but sometimes the answers elude me...
and remain unspoken...

nice work here...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-06-28 01:51 PM

Dec ~ Well, If'n I had said that you'da konked me on my punkin haid

et ~ That's a wonderful thought. I just might do that

VAS ~ You are getting warm, but only slightly

SEA ~ Don't give up, gal. Hang in there

Ron ~ The clues will get easier, I promise

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

7 posted 2001-06-28 08:26 PM

Well hurry up! I can't wait much longer to figure this out..I hate to NOT know the answer!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2001-06-28 09:05 PM

Hmmm????

Light without shadow
fearless unknown
journey to converge
paths of mind
in love's light
to follow thus

whatever the answer it sound like a good thing...yes.

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