The Things Were Said Undone

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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-06-28 11:03 AM

Why this have to end this love?
When the things are said undone,
And now It Is over between us,
Why should left every thing undone,
Because It Is over now,
And love Isn't the same like before,
When things were said undone,
It Is hard to know
we left all the words we said was undone,
We came everything undone,
Everything broken
And silence spoken,
even the love has died,
The things said undone,
Why love has to be ended
And you know the things were undone,
Before the love was ended,
The things are said undone,
No reasons,
No turning back,
The things were said undone,
The words we said,
was never complete,
It was undone,
Wonder why?
And Why should be like this ,
When the things are said undone,
and why the things were said undone,
All things we said come undone,

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 06-28-2001).]

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-06-28 11:07 AM

This is so well said and magnifys the truth of the written word.....

                            "We came everything undone,
                                      Everything broken
                                     And silence spoken,
                                    even the love has died,
                                    The things said undone,
                                   Why love has to be ended
                               And you know the things were undone,
                                   Before the love was ended,
                                   The things are said undone,
                                        No reasons,
                                       No turning back,
                                  The things were said undone,
                                      The words we said,
                                     was never complete,
                                       It was undone,
                                        Wonder why?
                                  And Why should be like this ,
                                 When the things are sid undone,
                               and why the things were said undone,
                                 All things we said come undone,"

I love the poetic reasoning!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-06-28 11:11 AM

Undone usually is not good. Great premise here. Enjoyed your work.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2001-06-28 06:19 PM

so sad when things and words are unsaid...
heartfelt penned.

((warm hugs))
Charisma

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2001-06-29 01:28 PM

We're often left with unanswered questions and regrets... This poem has a lovely sense of melancholy... well done!

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