Open Poetry #14 |
jesse |
dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i knew a boy named jesse with wings of whitest feather his heart was nestled on his sleeve his image tooled in leather a bleeder of affection his soul as his friend and guide but those wings he carried on his back became a thorn turned in his side jesse, broken angel couldn't plug the hole wallowing in his sorrow when the life of him she stole i pondered the fate of him with wings folded tight in fear i urged him to take flight but angel wouldn't hear so i let him hide within my pocket and hoped that he would see that in the darkness is no place for angel-wings to be jesse... wear your bandage but listen when you hear the wind sing your wounds will heal and if you try you can fly on mended wing... -dgvarner 6-29-01 no i wont be afraid. no i...wont be afraid, just as long as you stand, stand by me... -ben e king [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 06-28-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah..a sad but tender telling... I enjoyed! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
dg, this was an interesting tale. So what was your inspiration? Nice to see you posting again. Parker |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ I know your inspiration ... and what a loving and caring write for a friend. Lovely thoughts, my friend. With friends like you to help him soar ... he will ! *Hugs* to you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
CPAT..i thank you for reading..glad you enjoyed PARKER..why, my friend jesse of course..you think i just made this up?? MARGIE..i hope he will find his blowing wind soon..the one that will lift him up and take him soaring high hugs, g |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
hun *hugs* when you said you were working on something for me i was very happy. didnt know what it was but was soooo happy. now to see that what you were working on was this lovley poem i am hounerd. thank you very much. this is getting saved and when i get to work printed out thank you hun. you have made me smile this day. and who knows this angel might just fly on wounded wing to pay ya a visit sometime thank you again hun *hugs* love ya jesse the broken And I cry to the alleyway |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Atta girl....atta guy! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sorry, didn't make the connecton. The Poet Jesse.... I didn't know you wrote inspirational type poetry too.... Your very good. This is a wonderful piece... I know that life like flying is a solo activity... but its so important to have friends on the ground cheering us on and not shooting at us.. a lovely write from the heart. Parker |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
And this brings him back here if only briefly. You are wonderful to do this for Jesse. I for one, miss his work around here. |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
I've gotten to know Jesse outside of passions, and have heard the sorrow he carries. He's a totally sweetie-pie, and I wish he would come back around Jesse - We all love you here *sigh* nobody cares |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
Temptress: becarful what you wish for you just might get it Tamma: *hugs* ok now you got me blushin thank you hun. thank you alot. you are very sweet also dear thank you all so much Jesse The Broken And I cry to the alleyway |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
JES..you'll fly again.. i'm sure of it..look at all your support just right here... glad you liked this one.. LADY..thanks for stopping in PARKER..thanks love..i write whatever's in there.. i dont name it..it just is what it is.. TEMPTRESS..the things we have to do to get these folks to come on back...jeez! lol Angel's a good man..and a good friend too TAMMA..yes..i figured i'd better tell him this was posted to get him in here to read! lol good to see his name back around aye thanks for reading.. JES..youre back? hey..wheres my tape?? ps..youre welcome.. hugs, g "If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend." |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
hun *huggles* tape will be on the way soon. i promise. *looks* now where did i put those blank tapes. hmmmmmmm And I cry to the alleyway |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
dgvarner you have a soft heart...lovely verse...James |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- ok...so i'm a little slow, but i'm here. this is truly awesome...as are you... jesse is very fortunate to have found a friend in you...there is none better.. you KNOW i love this and I KNOW that this came straight from your heart... love and hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 06-30-2001).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful write!... I love this verse to set up the end... "a bleeder of affection his soul as his friend and guide but those wings he carried on his back became a thorn turned in his side" Very nicely done!! |
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