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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-05-23 08:05 PM

Your Poem

you ask me
to write a poem
a poem
just for you
I tried
and I tried
but
nothing
would do
for the
sweetest poem
I know
is the poem
between
me and you

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-05-23 08:07 PM

*sigh*

you know that I love this one helen. . .

it's perfect. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-05-23 08:19 PM

And both of you deserve such a poem...cherish it!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-05-23 08:27 PM

very nice, Helen, very nice

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2001-05-23 09:07 PM

1slick_lady - yes, you certainly are; 1slick_lady....... Just beautiful.....

Bc

g-hm
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 85

5 posted 2001-05-24 09:17 PM

Such a sweet secret 1slick_lady.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2001-05-25 10:31 AM

nice

liked it

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

7 posted 2001-05-25 11:42 AM

Just saw this one, I love this. The poem between me and you...very poetic.

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

8 posted 2001-05-30 02:10 PM

Thank You..... I really like this
You know i've asked and asked and asked,
And finally this Great One.

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

9 posted 2001-05-30 02:29 PM

This is really, really, really...........yes, so ever good!!!

Thank you so much

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

10 posted 2001-05-30 03:30 PM

Delightful sweet writing. I really like the conclusion!

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

11 posted 2001-05-30 03:35 PM

perfect in every way....love it

Charisma

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