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. . . Together as one . . . quadruple senryu
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. . . Together as one . . . quadruple senryu |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
loving forever never knowing you by rote ah, discovery and you responding like your first experience breathlessly giving loving you anew each exploration of you as though uncharted together, we two alone, only half of us together, as one Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is lovely....and familiar.... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is beautiful |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
incomplete apart soul to soul ~ a perfect fit we were meant to be  ~SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful senryu. Most gracefully done. PM |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
alone, only half of us together, as one Love it. Melton |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Beautiful. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
lovely job you've done on this one |
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Panne447 Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 196S.A. TX |
This is a terific Senyru- thanks for sharing this- it is lovely. Panne |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Yes I like that so much. It's such fun to write senryus, haikus or even acrostics. Thanks for sharing. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful senryus.....love it Charisma |
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